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Reincarnated in a Novel World

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[Series: A road to Villain I] A young boy recovered his memories of his previous life, but the world got destroyed in just one year. "Will he be able to survive?" The most intriguing part is that the world is under the control of a child. Can the world be regulated properly? Note: Novel completed on chapter 164 so please don't buy later chapters.

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Chapter 1Chapter 1: School

Province Xth

8:00 a.m, 01 Apr 2600

In a certain area of Province Xth, there is a small villa that occupies approximately 1 acre of land. This charming villa is enveloped by enchanting trees and bushes arranged in beautiful patterns.

"Young Master, today is a very important day as you have to awaken your Talent, gain a 'Profession,' and activate the 'System,'" a middle-aged man encourages a boy.

"I know that today is the 'Talent Awakening Event,' that's why I am going to school," the boy calmly said to the middle-aged man and started walking towards his school.

Ten minutes later, he reaches his school, which is around 1 km away from his villa. Many students have already reached the school's campus, chit-chatting with each other.

As I'm watching and thinking, a voice enters my ears. "Sam, where are you looking?"

I turn my head and see a chubby student. "Nothing, just thinking about the 'Talent Awakening Event'," I replied.

"Come on, Sam, even if you don't have any higher-grade Talent, you already have a ton of money," the chubby man replied with enthusiasm.

"Hey, what do you know? I have a lot of money, but that doesn't mean I'm safe. Without a higher-grade Talent, I'm vulnerable. Countless eyes are watching our every movement, waiting for the right moment to engulf my money in one gulp," I cursed at Wang Feng.

"Cough* cough* Sam, you are embarrassing me. I just said those words to comfort you," Wang Feng replied with thick skin.

"Anyway, today is an important day as this will decide many things in our life," I said to him in a heavy tone, as I already have business pressure on my shoulders.

"Hey, why are you saying it in such a somber tone as if today is your funeral day?" He replied in a funny tone, lifting my depressing thoughts.

"Yeah, you are right. Why should I worry now?" I laughed, and he also laughed.

As we are talking, a message prompt appears on our handwatch.

[Gathered in School's Playground in 1 minute]

One minute later, on the stage, the principal stands tall and exudes a majestic aura.

The teachers and staff members stood beside the principal, showing their support and attention.

The atmosphere is filled with anticipation and excitement as everyone awaits the principal's announcements.

As the principal starts speaking, a hush falls over the crowd, and the students listen attentively.

The teachers assist in maintaining order and ensuring that students are engaged and focused.

They make sure that everyone follows the assembly etiquette, such as sitting quietly and not disrupting the proceedings.

As the principal speech comes to an end, the students and teachers disperse back to their respective classes, ready to continue with their daily activities.

The assembly line in the school's playground serves as a reminder of the importance of the 'Talent Awakening Event', Predecessor's Unity and teamwork, and collective growth in the Blue Star World's People community.

Class Xth

Every teacher is present, and nearly a hundred students are sitting at their seats as today is the 'Talent Awakening Event'.

"Students, after ten years of study, you have all learned and mastered the theoretical knowledge of Talent and professions."

"Today will be the day you awaken your 'Talent,' gain a 'Profession,' and activate the 'System,' which will determine your future life."

"I won't talk much here as you already know everything. I just hope you can contribute to our world as much as you can."

"Every student comes here one by one and puts their hand on this Pearl Stone."

"The first one, Xu Seng!"

Xu Sheng responded and walked excitedly towards the 'Pearl Stone' and put his hand on it.

A light burst from the 'Pearl Stone,' and a prompt appears on the Talent Device.

[Talent: F grade, Life Profession: Farmer]

Xu Sheng's face is slightly pale, and he doesn't expect to become a farmer.

He has also get the prompt in his mind.

[World System activated]

[You have awakened 'F grade Talent,' 'Farmer Life Profession']

"Xu Sheng has awakened F grade Talent and the Farmer Profession."

"A Farmer can do it. If you can upgrade to a big farmer in the future, or even a holy farmer, it is also a good profession."

Every student is giving their opinion, as even a fool can know that awakening an 'F grade Talent' will limit his profession options.

"The second one is Zhou Wen."

Tense after hearing his name, Zhou Wen trotted all the way to the Pearl Stone.

The same brilliant light appears.

[Talent: D grade, Auxiliary Profession: Alchemist]

After seeing the prompt from the 'Awakening Device', Zhou Wen is satisfied with both his 'Talent' and 'Profession'.

His father is an Alchemist, so he can also inherit his father's business.

He also get the prompt in his mind.

[World System activated]

[You have awakened 'D grade Talent,' 'Alchemist Auxiliary Profession']

"Hong Hing"

One after another, students awaken their Talent, and most of them get D and C grade Talents, along with Life and Auxiliary Professions.

As students were awakening their Talents, the Homeroom Teacher's face became ugly.

The Awakening Teacher who is standing beside the homeroom teacher also noticed and is very clear about the situation of the students' talents.

"This year's students are quite average."

Hearing the Awakening Teacher's words, the homeroom Teacher also sighed.

As both teachers were conversing, a prompt from the awakening device disrupted their conversation.

[Talent: S grade, Combat Profession: Ice Mage]

"Oh! Su Yanran has awakened an 'S grade Talent'."

"She has also gained the Ice Mage Combat Profession."

"Ice Princess"

Su Yanran pov

2 minutes earlier

Su Yanran puts her hand on the Pearl Stone, and a colorful light emits, filling Class Xth room.

A prompt appears in her mind.

[World System activated]

[You have awakened an 'S grade Talent,' 'Ice Mage Combat Profession']

After seeing these prompts, her face bloomed.

"Oh! She has awakened a high-grade Talent and a rare Profession," the Awakened teacher exclaims after seeing her prompt on the awakening device.

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0 :Auxiliary Volume
1 :School and Intermediate life

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Thefantastictouch
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Dropped at the end of the 4th chapter. Usually, when I write reviews , I try to at least talk about a book's pros. However for this one... i hadn't seen any.   So , let's get right down to the cons : - The writing style is very amateur. The first chapter and the majority of the second one were honestly , skippable.The author could have just opened up the book on the scene with the Mc measuring his talent before he revealed us he was a transmigrator and nothing would have changed.And it's all because it told us nothing useful .Plus the event that occured were explained and talked about later by the Mc . We only care about the Mc and the story when we start a book. So please focus on that rather than detailing how this character felt , which rank he got and what the instructor said. Moreover , the narration which switches to these uninteresting characters before we even know the Mc , and the writing style in itself ( structure of the sentences, words used, etc.) scream amateurism. - The writing quality is low. The author said he used ChatGPT, and it shows.The first chapter was not only badly written , the conjugation, which switches between tenses and use uncorrectly each one of them, makes the whole thing even harder to read.Add to this the many mistakes , and you  end up driven out of the story the more you read. -  The pace is slow. To give you an idea of the chapter 's length, the 4th one was 1223 words( according to the author himself). Yet it appeared to me to be more than this , because i was simply bored.Nothing exciting or intriguing happened.And the general ambiance reinforced this feeling of slowness too. - The general ambiance is like the Mc. The mc is the cold necromancer type , and so is the general vibe of the book. If only the Mc´s inner monologues contrasted his actions , or if the book jumbled with many ambiances , it would have been better. But it's all up to the author in the end. Still , for me , this book isn't the one. I pray for the author's improvement.    

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