Reincarnated as a Female Cultivator [Deleted]

I'd like to start by saying I usually don't start novels with less than 100 chapters. that being said this book hooked me from the start. the character grows more defined each chapter. and though the mc was formerly a male he quickly transitions into becoming accustomed to the new body. the authors writing style is what captures the attention as though you are present in the moment.

an overall Nice read and good novel. Hook me from the start until i ran out of chapters. Nice job and keep going. ty for the read author. <3

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Let me start with the reason of the low score, First is the story, this is the cultivation type of world, but it feels like the author is trying to merge a isekai type of story, and a bad one, with a slow life. Conclusion, there is no bad choices for the MC just results. Second is the MC, this one is badly tought, i know i sound malicious but there is a reason. Memories. When combining the child and the male, there must be a change, minimal, but a change the same. Then there is the goddess, this is a heavy personality change, but the author doesn´t point it. Three, the cultivation realms, they sound good, but they are a miss, can´t remember, will never remember. Conclusion, author i recomend to ask someone for ideas that will make the story more linear with the intention wished, and to repair my points for the plot holes that they are.

The writing quality is... Poor. Not offensively so, but it's in that grey area where it's not hilariously bad or amazingly bad, it's just boringly low quality. If I could give partial stars, it'd be 2.5 on the dot. That aside, I've only read a few chapters, and I've been too distracted by the writing quality to properly notice much else.

i am addicted to it and this very different genre and I'm impressed with story where he finds out he actually the God of death and I never expected this twist

Template. A template hero. Template character traits of the hero. Template plot moves and turns. Nothing new. _________________________________________

this novel is great although at one part i didn't understand a chapter, This is what im looking for in female mc cultivation novels it's still great I recommend reading it

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Honest Review I've had this novel in my library for a while now and since I caught up on what I'm currently reading, I decided to read this and I've got to say I wish I read this sooner and a nice refreshing story, the world building is great, back story of characters, lovable main character and side. I'm glad I'm reading this now and hope the author will have regular releases and I'm willing to vote with my only 2 power stones at the moment. Keep up the GREAT WORK, you got this!

The writing gets better as the novel progresses. Nice to see the author picking up the novel again, I have seen too many novels like this been dropped by their authors. Please keep writing.

Story is good, 10/10 would recommend LOL XD.................................................................................................

Very good story, although I've read other stories that have the name Zeruna in it is it a common name or are you the same author? just asking out of curiosity.

Interesting story so far, but I'm not sure if English is not the author's first language or if the chapters have just not been proofread. There are several errors that can be fixed by spending a bit of time proofreading along with decent knowledge of English. Overall the writing is understandable, though not the best. To potential readers, I would recommend trying to read the novel and seeing if you like it, but keep in mind the first 2 chapters are basically the background settings of the novel.

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Why did you delete it so what if your not going to be a creator anymore. I can't post this question unless I rate so a standard 3.0 should do

i cant bring myself to like the character after 50 chaps or so hes dumb, naive and gives away too much information, hes also a wastrel and i hate the fact that he just ended up looking like the goddess

I didn't even master 15 chapters. I've already started to get annoyed by the addition of a new name for the main character every time he introduces himself to someone else.