Parallel: Return To Origin

The author is really good at describing the whole scene he is creating in his book. I was able to picture everything in my head with no problem. Grammar use is very good and book over all is good. Gave me the whole Star Trek, aliens, and the 100 feel to be honest.

Hello, I'm your author, here to do a chapter 20 review. I started this novel with little to no expectations or experience. However, so far it has gone great. Way better than I imagined. For one, the MC has been steadily developing recently, getting away from his bad habit of enjoying his new life. But let me not spoil it for you 😅. The world background is also slowly fleshing out. And I say slowly because I don't like the idea of that info dump thing. I like to take it slow, steady, and natural. So far, the world can be seen in bits and pieces. This is not a spoiler, so putting it here won't affect the flow of the novel. The nearest few continents should be visible within the next 20 or so chapters. So, look forward to it 🙌. As for the writing style, I'll let you be the judge. And of course the writing quality. The quality is also not bad. At least from my perspective and various others who seem to enjoy my work. But I'm not a machine. So some things might slip by from time to time. And this is where we come together as a community. You point it out in the comments, and I fix it. So, I would like to say that you should like and subscribe, but we all know that's not possible. But, you can add it to your library and review or comment on it. Thanks in advance. Hope to see you again. And have a nice day. 🙏🙏🙏

I do have to say, the author can describe how a monster could look like, and the background was actually pretty good as well. One thing I didn't see was how the General looked like, so it was hard to imagine how he looked like

I absolutely love the world building in this novel. The details are so precise and intricate. And I love Alfred's humour. It manages to make me laugh every time. Hope the author won't drop this novel.