Naruto secret world

I love this series like adding more harem members in chapter gaps not too frequently and adding more worlds and new girls like rias and tio . I hope you continue I had a stone so i gave it to this story I am also new to this website

Finn Anderson... Are you serious given his name like that in naruto world. you should use Japanese name and everything will work using English name isn't​ fit in at all

Just another system slave what is it with authors and them turning their MCs to system slaves. I feel like the author just wants us to know that he wants to be a slave by projecting himself in the mc.

Wow... Use MCs own karma to turn him into a slave... I never saw something so ridiculous before. I really can't fathom what goes on in these authors minds. They just add a system and makes the MC it's slave. And this story executes even such a trash idea in an even more trashy way.

I really like your story the way the mc is reincarnated in Naruto world but with Kaguya seal inside him, can't wait for what going to happen in the future with Kaguya seal inside him.

Need to fix the grammar and get the names of characters right. Good idea but has many plot holes and pacing seemed a little too fast for me.

MC blushes at seeing a beautiful face. Is MC a girl??? He felt that his face was heating up, these are the actions of girls. Hua doesn't seem like a proud man at all

Too highly unrealistic and the main character is a simp .

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very less, very less grammar used. The grammar is not very good and makes MC look like a village idiot. Plot armor is too thick to see straight.

just a load of Chinese nonsense if i could i would put 0 for the stars

Worse than Google translator quality. Each chapter has on average 10-20 inconsistencies and common sense took a hike and never came back and mc somehow gets items or some stuff without explanations and lets not forget that mc is a poor kid without family who lived in a hut and lets not ask why said hut had various rooms, a bathroom and a shower with running water.... lets also not mention how (Said by author) mc defeated 3 adult ninjas when his stats says that even a 7 years old civilian kid is stronger and faster and that a punch from a 10 years old can kill you...

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Yah segini aja menurut saya..... MC terlalu bergantung dengan sistem dan ah entahlah makin saya baca makin ga jelas alurnya jadi tambah pusing saya😂 Saran saya tolong MC jangan terlalu nafsuan jadi kurang enak saya bacanya Tapi terserah lah setiap penulis memiliki fetish tersendiri melampiaskan keinginan imajinasinya sendiri ketika menulis... Yah... Itu aja

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The amount of mental damage I took even reading the first few chapters is truly unpresidented. Imagine if a wish fullfilment story was written by a child who refused to check for spelling. Oh, and rhe MCs name is completely not fitting for thr setting, on par with names like “Bob Uchiha” and “Jim Uzumaki”. Drinking a lead cocktail will be less damaging to your IQ than reading this story.

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This is so trashy bruh, I just could not handle anymore of the MC’s BS like bruh all of this makes no sense . This is big trash like ultra mega trash in fact Just to prove how trash this fic is l present to you its physical embo diment:

Everything you need to know about this story: 1. The name of the hero... A setting in which everyone has Japanese names. Finn... Anderson... Words are superfluous here. 2. In each new sentence and/or paragraph, the name of the hero. It's like I didn't understand his name the first time. 3. Another slave of the system.