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My Touch Corpse System

作者: InJustThis
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The big villain, Ye Sato, acquired a system that allows him to travel around anime worlds. He will travel from one anime world to another. And during his travels, he will bring chaos. He is a highly-qualified villain. As a villain, he needs to confront the protagonist. That means beating, discredit, stealing, and killing the protagonist is exactly what he will do. But that’s, of course, not all! This story is not only about villain vs protagonist, it’s about villain vs the world. To make it short: He will change the plot he doesn't like. He will plot against people he doesn’t like. He will get what he wants. He will do bad things. He will do a lot of bad things. _____________________________ *Don’t expect perfect grammar or story. I am studying at university and have a part-time job. So the only time I write is during my breaks. *I will upload on Sunday if no accident occurs. Like me getting run over by a car. :D *This novel contains vulgar words, dark themes, and very dirty and dark humor. Read it at your own risk! *Everyone is welcome to throw critique at me. But don’t be offensive. *I claim no ownership or credit regarding the existence of pre-existing characters, contents, or the cover. (Warning: Contain spoiler!) _____________________________ Some have asked me to make a discord, so I made one. But I have to warn you that, I have like, no idea, how discord works. xD Discord: https://discord.gg/UuTABmM8j5

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Mastrethe
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This could have been a really nice story. If there is something good about it is the way the sistem works and all the possibilities that it brings to the mc. It has a little bit of novelty about it. A little. Unfortunately the author completely ruins the story with his way too dumb and narcisistic mc. It is true that in the sinopsis it is written that the mc is evil, but being evil and being stupid are two completely different things that the author doesn't seem to realise. About the mc's personality it can be said that his focus is not on getting stronger, nor getting a harem, or getting rich, or any other normal thing. Nope. His complete focus lies on bashing the original mc of "Highschool of the dead", and a few other characters too, to the point one could say that this story is entirely dedicated to that. His obsession with it is so big that many chapters are dedicated only to this very aspect. The plot of the story is completely sacrificed in order to have more and more bashing, to the point that up to chapter 39 the story has barely progressed at all. Worse still is the fact that the mc likes to inner monologe far too much, and his logic is complitely twisted and absurd. It is very difficult to take all the nonsense he thinks seriously. This mc is also extremely narcisistic and the readers are constantly bombarded with entire paragraphs describing how great the mc thinks of himself. I would say that in this story the inner monologing ocupies like 80% of the entire story. That is the reason the pace of the story is so slow. As for this story being a harem, I would say that it is not true. Maybe the author added that tag because he had plans for that in the future, but up to chapter 39 it can be said that the mc barely has a relationship with one girl. Barely. So no harem so far.

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