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MY HERO ACADEMIA: New Generation

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This is the story of the worlds next symbol of peace. Hope you enjoy my totally not trashy story.

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Note: If you like the Video game genre (MMORPG) but with a twist like the whole world is forced to play the MMORPG game...to survive, then you will love it. (It's not exactly an MMO game but game-like settings.) So, well, even if you are not a fan of the video game genre, you might still like it so give it a try. This novel has more things than just the video game genre. :D. ----- [ Choose your unique path and walk on it to see vast and new horizons that you've never seen before! ] (You can look at the "Paths" AUX chapter if you want to know what are the paths]. Aren had started his unique path along with his mother, his childhood friend, and others who also have their own Paths just like the people in the rest of the world! ---- [ Lifeform elevation process finished. Choose your path. Or, in your world's terms, choose a Job class. ] -1st: Emporio Armalist. -2nd: Runic Mage. -3rd: Heavilist Weaver. [ Trust your instinct to choose the path. ] Which path will Aren choose? Will they survive the despair that is to come after three years? What is behind all that magical phenomenon? How many are going to die even before facing despair because of the dire phenomenons? --- Quinn looked at her three options curiously. [ Seibaes Whisperer ] [ Spirit Invoker ] [ Brutus Zontheos ] She decided not to go with her instinct's choice but chose the path that sounded powerful...what will that unfurl for her? However, all path options given to individuals are suitable because they are given to them through a dream test that nobody remembers after their lifeform elevation process is finished. So what exactly is the goal behind this despairing phenomenon and the mysterious voice that suddenly forced them to go into a magical world to get strong if they don't want to die in despair? ... One fine day, golden brilliance appeared in the sky out of nowhere and started traveling the whole planet. Shortly afterward, A middle-aged man appeared in the sky and sighed after looking at the golden brilliance, " Sigh...Looks like it started. " ... The golden brilliance stayed for three days as the whole world talked about this strange phenomenon. But after three days, all golden brilliance gathered in the sky before becoming a grand mountain filled with lush greenery and water bodies. Along with that, Every single person heard a grand voice, as if a king's decree. [ Mortals! Your time has come. After three years, you will fight against despair and will be wiped out. BUT there is a chance to fight and win against that despair. Join the Myriad Mountain and start your journey in the Wild Expanse to get strong! ] [ This journey will be filled with danger but also opportunities. Work hard for three years until the despair finally arrives. There will be two final results: First, either your whole world will be destroyed along with the beings living in it, or your world will prosper like never before with brand new horizons appearing in front of you! ] [ GO!! Show your hard work and worth if you want to survive against the despair that will come after three years. ] PS:- I own the cover. My Patreon if you want to support me and Arts for this novel---https://www.patreon.com/ashdezth A secret:- You are in for an awesome ride so sit tight and watch as something you've never seen before...*cough* unfolds before your eyes.

LivingVoid · 武侠
4.7
259 Chs
目錄
4 :The Dark Side
3 :Secrets amongst us
2 :The Symbol
1 :The New Beginning

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LeoLyonWriting
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ALLLLLLRIGHT, I just got to around to reading your fanfic. I have to say, it's definitely gotten a great story so far. I'm not judging based on spelling errors or mistakes (Being that 1. it's clearly understandable and 2. I'm sure I have some mistakes as well here and there), only the content and the other pieces itself. I would try and strive more towards going in your own direction with some things, I've noticed that you sometimes go with the MHA Anime/Manga and parallel it to Daiki and the others. Which honestly, isn't really a bad thing, it's always good to start somewhere and have a stable build up, even if you have to use some things from the story. The characters could use a little work, by that I mean have some chapters where you could possibly have them interact more with Daiki outside of the whole U.A. High setting (Exams, Fights, and such). Feel free to put your own spin on Daiki as well, do things that you haven't seen any other MHA Fanfic OC do yet! Another thing, I highly encourage that you don't use "Said" as often, unless need be of course, that way it can spice up your chapters! Again, I really would like to see more from some of the characters that are the most important besides Daiki! You've gotten quite a bit, but you've opened the surface on some really awesome character development for these characters. Also, don't be afraid to bring new things to the table! As long as you build them up and have them make sense, it'll go perfectly with your story! For example, the Tanjiro being Leonidus' Great Grandfather in my story, that shouldn't have made sense but having moments outside of the character helped it come together. I'd also recommend that you go back through previous chapters once you have the time and combine some of the sentences with each other, having paragraphs at LEAST 6 to 7 sentences (That aren't filled with action/fighting, then really about 10 to maybe even 12 are acceptable) makes it a bit easier for people to read. Speaking of that, also separating your spoken dialogue from the written dialogue helps out as well! All in all, this story has the potential to be amazing! I honestly love the direction you're going so far, but I really do recommend that you have fun with it, test things out that people may like or that people might not like. Take criticism (Like, actual well thought out, not like "Oh, this sucks, make this a Harem" or "Garbage... Daiki needs to be this and this..." and so on) and use it to improve your story as well. As long as that criticism is valuable, actually pointing out flaws instead of calling it garbage and leaving it at that, you can use that to your upmost advantage. And the obvious, go through your chapters and correct spelling mistakes and what not. Other than that, I personally love this story so far and can't wait to see where you take this! Keep on writing, don't push yourself to put out chapters everyday either, just go at your own pace!

Hashira_
Hashira_Lv1Hashira_

i fricking love it ok it sooo good i ve been wanting to read smthing like this sooo goodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgood

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