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Mushoku Tensei: Magic Swordsman

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On the eve of being drafted as a pro soccer player, Noel Miller was hit by a drunk driver and became paralyzed from the waist down. Falling into a deep depression and believing himself to be a financial burden to his family, Noel goes to kill himself. However, he died after pushing away a boy from a speeding truck and thus reincarnated as Rudeus Greyrat. Now with a body that could walk and run as well as the prospect of learning magic and swordsmanship, Rudeus Greyrat is resolved to become the greatest Magic Swordsman in the world. Author's notes: Loved Mushoku Tensei, hated the main character. Wanted to write a story with the great world building of MT but with a better main character, that while also possessing his own set of flaws, is at least not a perverted horndog who lusts over the body of children. MC is more mature and charismatic than original MC, but still has his moments of childishness. He is also more focused on swordsmanship and martial arts than magic. People who keep asking if it's a harem: I don't know yet. Confirmed pairing Eris. Anyone else, I am undecided.

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A reader reincarnates in the world of Mushoku Tensei as Seraphim Greyrat, the first son of Paul and Zenith born instead of Rudeus. Using his meta knowledge to the fullest, he aims to become the strongest existence of that world, using both sword and magic. ... Warning: A SLOW PACE FANF-FIC WITH A LARGE FOCUS ON MAGIC STUDY AND WITH A HIGH LEVEL OF DETAIL. STARTS OFF SIMILAR TO CANON. Seraphim studies the magic system of the world and Battle Aura techniques in depth to understand them fully and gain the best possible advantages. He becomes overpowered without external cheats, a result of his hard work and brains. Note: How this fanfiction is different from others in that many Mushoku Tensei fanfics seem to often get the magic system of the world wrong. The abilities that the Protagonists develop often go against the magic system of the world, are illogical and ridiculous, and something like this in my opinion completely breaks immersion. For example, ridiculous new magic spells and OP sword moves that get invented by an infant MC despite the fact that they are completely devoid of logic and are just impossible without cheats. Here, my Protagonist faces various obstacles and problems during training, that he should, while also gaining insights and does what is realistically possible to take his training and fighting methods to another level. He also achieves things that seem nearly impossible or fantastical, but with good logic and reason behind them. -It is a harem story, but I aim for meaningful romance and deep relationships. It is a harem story. However, harem is not the major focus of the story at all. It only means that the MC will have more than one partner EVENTUALLY. -Because the Protagonist accomplishes A LOT during his early years, there might be no real romance or even harem content anyway for something like 100 chapters. There will be no child sex here as well. There might be some romancing and teasing, but just that, nothing sexual. How this story is different from the original is that it is not about an MC searching for a cure for his ED, being passive and pathetic pervert all throughout the story while screwing around and doing nothing most of the time, but is a man on a mission. Seraphim starts from a similar point as Rudeus, but his actions cause a slowly spreading butterfly effect as he's focused on the most optimal path and BENEFITS. In contrast to Rudeus's perversion, the MC can sometimes instead be amoral and do evil pragmatic things for the sake of his ambitions and loved ones, so people with fragile hearts be warned. He is not as disgusting, but it doesn't mean he's a goody-two-shoe white knight. ... SUMMARY: -MC is born instead of Rudeus with just his meta knowledge and high talent. Taking more after Zenith, he has blonde hair and blue eyes. He trains his mana from an extremely young age, masters Battle Aura and chantless healing magic | A genius of magic and the sword, a determined true main character pursuing supremacy and eternal life. -The story will have a deep dive into the magic system and how the MC interprets it (how I interpret what we know using logic). It might be boring for some people, but it can be very interesting for others (would be for me). -The story starts with the same layout, and has slowly spread out changes as the MC is focused on BENEFITS. -The world is the same as in the original, the only AU change is the MC's body, looks and name.

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1 :Reincarnated
2 :Demon Continent

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Pretty good! The writing style is a bit overdone for me and seems to lean a bit too much towards hammy parody for my tastes, but it's pretty good in spite of that. I cringe a bit when I read it, but that's my personal taste, and I'm sure there are people who like that sort of writing style. Not personally for me, but I can appreciate it for what it is. Ah, but if I had to describe it, I would say that it definitely reads more like a Chinese web novel than a proper written novel, so don't go in expecting the latter. The characterization isn't the best, but they roughly follow along with how the characters are in the story (with the exception of Rudy, of course). I'm sure that will improve as the story progresses and the author gets more comfortable with each character's voice though. It's interesting to see how this Rudy leans into the child genius route instead of trying to hide it. I do wish that there were more deeper explanations on how he was able to pick things up instead of handwaving it as just being a genius, but that's not the point of the story, so it's fine. I personally don't think that Rudy would be able to improve so rapidly in terms of physique and sword techniques due to the fact that his particular Laplace factor prevents him from accumulating the Battle Aura needed to perform some of the higher level ones, but I'll take it as a given that this Rudy just has that nerf removed. In terms of plot, the broad strokes are the usual sequence up until he leaves home. Childhood magic training, meeting Roxy and learning magic... etc. There's not too much new in here. Rudy learns to hunt and interacts with the villagers a bit more, and he also fights some monsters to test out his powers, but it isn't too significant. The reactions of everyone to Rudy's talent is kind of funny though. I do wish that magic wasn't handwaved as much... And, er, that the author knew a bit more of what he was talking about when he tried to bring scientific explanations into things, but I understand the limitations of that. Just don't expect perfectly accurate rationale behind how some things work. Seeing Rudy becoming a magic swordsman is super interesting though. But it seems like the author is eager to get to the meat of the story since a good portion of the intro reads more like a log than events unfolding. Than again, it's similar to that in the original, so it could just be mimicry of the source. Fight scenes are a mixed bag though. There are great parts that are a blow by blow exchange, but then there are other parts that are just summed up and skipped over. One part of the story that does bother me a bit though is how everyone is stunned into silence by Rudy's magical sword style. I get that it's amazing already, and I get that it would amaze other people but reading about people being impressed over and over again gets a bit dull. Right now (As of Chapter 26) we're just starting to really change things up. Instead of teaching Eris math and normal things, since Rudy becomes Ghyslaine's student, he gets rolled in as a magic tutor/bodyguard. It's an interesting change, and I'm curious to see where it ends up.

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