Well, at the age of 5, he is already stronger than 70% of the creatures in the world of mushoku tensei. The pace of development is too high, he invented and recreated his own fencing school... Of course, I understand that most fanfiction is "wish fulfillment", but at least for decency, you can write a story where the main character really tries to gain strength and makes real efforts for this (this claim is absolutely to all fanfiction on the webnovel site). The characters and the surrounding world are more or less alive, although only a few characters were shown. The prospect of the development of this fan fiction is present, so I advise the author to suspend the rapid development of the main character, otherwise by chapter 20 he will become a god of sword and magic. It is also necessary to normally show difficulties on the way to obtaining power, and not to sharply suppress it, as some authors like, without really explaining anything. I hope that this fan fiction will be able to overcome the "dead lane" in the form of the "big bang" story arc, because I have not seen a single fan fiction that could pass through this arch. P.S. I know that it is not worth evaluating any work with so many chapters, and I don't care, consider this as a kind of advice to the author.
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His progress in magic stops at the Water Saint rank magic, Cumulonimbus. He is focusing more on swordsmanship than magic spells.
Still I think as a 5 years old his swordsman rank too high
It has been a long time since i readed the original, but at what age did rudeus reach saint rank in the novel?
5 years old
Then i don't know what are they complaining about him getting stronger too fast. The original wasn't as strong at the physical side of things, but here this is already a talent he got in his past life. What i would find strange is if he becomes weaker then the original mc when he already started training with the help of his mom at the begining and the original had to figure everything by himself from a book until roxy was hired.
bruh.the real charecter reach that level without others help. it will be weird if our mc doesn't reach that level with his talent. it's completely ok in my book.
The difference between magic and fencing is quite significant, although Rudeus has become a "holy" magician, this does not mean that he has become so strong. He has only reached the level of "massive" spells, but using them takes too much time and is ineffective in many battles. Now the art of swordsmanship, where the advanced level (in three styles) is not just "strength", it is "might", especially when using a combat aura (tuki), are you looking at Eris, who trained and only reached the intermediate level (or advanced level in one style? I don't remember exactly) during the adventures with Rudeus, but she gave a worthy rebuff to very strong opponents. Moreover, our main character not only reached an advanced level in three styles, but also began to create his own style. So my words are not wrong.
The difference between magic and fencing is quite significant, although Rudeus has become a "holy" magician, this does not mean that he has become so strong. He has only reached the level of "massive" spells, but using them takes too much time and is ineffective in many battles. Now the art of swordsmanship, where the advanced level (in three styles) is not just "strength", it is "might", especially when using a combat aura (tuki), are you looking at Eris, who trained and only reached the intermediate level (or advanced level in one style? I don't remember exactly) during the adventures with Rudeus, but she gave a worthy rebuff to very strong opponents. Moreover, our main character not only reached an advanced level in three styles, but also began to create his own style. So my words are not wrong.
yeah.but isekai mc are cheat. honestly u r belittllimg magic compare to sword. how many of the kids are there who master saintlevel magic at 5. (I'm talking about Cannon mc here) so in that sense someone who focus on sword achieving that level can be forgiven. but he is only good at imitating them not at all strong enough to use this techniques in battle as he lack strength and experience.(just like how saint level magic is only used as deterent rather than in battle) the only reason he compete with his father because his father let's him and him using magic in duel. but I wont desagree with u though.all i did is pointing out some speculation based on what I knew of canon which is basically nothing much. so may be what u said have some truth in it too.lets wait and see. author clearly seen ur comment so may be he will try something different or he already have a plan for story with an op charecter
I'm not belittling magic, because ranobe emphasizes that saint-level magic is ineffective in many battles, and Rudeus needs a team to use higher-level magic. Therefore, Rudeus regularly used basic magic and did not engage in fights with strong opponents alone. It is after reaching a higher skill level (namely the "king" level) that the power of magic and fencing are relatively aligned.
The MC of this fanfic is only slightly stronger than the original MC. If he was the same strength or lower then there'd be no point in making a fanfic of it.
Can you recommend some good fics I've been trying to find some but it's hard on this site...
vainglory's fanfic in scribblehub, he had a mushoku fanfic
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i mean if it's a 1v1 battle between saint rank magician and a saint rank swordsman the swordsman would always win, because most of saink rank spells takes too long to cast and saint rank swordsman are also fast so goodluck hitting someone faster than your eye's can see
Should I recommend reading my Mushoku Tensei fanfiction?
