Mokuton Authority(Hiatus).

Please read whole message before forming opinion As of chapter 10 review/personal opinion I personally like the main character's "character type" And really appreciate the author going that eaxtra step to include already existing things from the source material instead of the "let's just use cool stuff from what ever random thing looks cool" I'll also mention that even though the author does make his main character powerful it's not at least at this point in the story off the charts powerful "power trip fantasy" or doing the random now the characters can do this (really hate it when anyone and or anything doesn't follow it's own rules) Main character's capabilities are following a path consistently and the few changes to the path has been shown not one of those random characters doing something that they couldn't possibly do before, than author "explaining why they can do that" Thanks

Me right now using the hidden forbidden Jutsu the famous glorified Thick Skin no Jutsu or more know as Shameless no Jutsu to give me 5 Stars. muahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahhaha.

Nice take on the plot 👍 The progress on MC's power and character build up is as real as it can get without outright Op him in short time. A must read Novel !! I totally recommend reading it wholeheartedly!!💯 Thanks for your hard work Author San 🤘

If you are looking for some random diary fanfic, that's for you. I've read 28 chapters and I can count the amount of dialogs in my fingers of one hand. It was 28 chapters of the MC just saying "I've trained for 1 year and learned it" time skip for 2 years "I've trained for 2 years and learned that" another time skip... Just a bunch of time skips and the Mc telling what he learned on his time skips.

The idea is good but the way it's brought out is complete dooodooo Just reading it kills my brain cells eventually making me even more stupid than I already am.

your story is really nice but u do need to put some life in it .. interaction between ppl is what is a story about... try to add more character in and make some conversation dont just keep one point story telling ...

How do I say this without being ‘mean’? It seems it’s not possible. So, I’ll be honest. This whole thing is stupid. If ya gonna do Shit like adding Chinese elements, please place a tag for that! The writing is of poor quality, making me question if I’m retarded for reading this or stupid for continuing... maybe I’m a FUCKING MASOCHIST?! Damn it! I’m out!

other than being a mokuton user nothing is good in this story. there are lot of grammatical and spelling errors which have not been fixed yet. half of the story is played in authors head and the other half is written down here. to me the worst think of this Fanfic is the conversation style.... it kills all the fun

one thing i hate is an mc that hides he's strength this mc is such a pussy, danzo wont do anything, I mean how else did kakashi survive and wasnt assassinated even though he was a God prodigy, if he showed signs of having wood style he'd be protected because wood style is good against tailed beast

The story is good but it takes a lot of effort to understand because of some wrong grammar and the MC is very OP so I like it...........All in all its good just need the grammar

劇透

The story ranges from ok to boring. what makes fan fics so entertaining to me is the interactions with the characters in the story and there is not a lot of that. its mostly him training and telling the reader stuff ill forgrt in a chapter. it eas intresting for the first 30 chapters. i dropped at chapter 57

劇透

usually don't write negative reviews this just bugged me. firstly I don't mind I lf when you go into another world you change the system of that world slightly however if you don't follow your previous set out ideas and make it unnecessarily convaluted your just being illogical and making plotholes as seen in this book. I have read pretty far thinking it will get better however I now realise I have wasted my time.

It was good at the start. Till the author pulled the legendary NERF and, *poof* it suck. Do not recomend it because will make you hooked at first then will make you feel like everything is trash just because the chapter you just read is trash.

The bullshit is high in this one............................................................................................................

Danzo adalah orang egois dan munafik, knpa MC berteman dengannya dan memberitahukan rahasianya, bukankah itu idiot dan merusak plot yang lebih baik dan lebih membingungkan???? 😭

So this novel is pretty good, just the POV stuff from the MC is really good and all the references are hilarious. The problem is the dialogue. It’s stilted and kind of reminds me of the Swedish guys from family guy if you don’t know them here’s a good link: https://youtu.be/RWhnUdakiXA Other than the dialogue and the sheer amount of time it took for the author to explain the training I’m hopeful for the future. It feels kinda like the story is still in its prologue and soon he will be strong and then we can start to see him just enjoying life and messing about in the world. I really hope this doesn’t become a power wank fest that’s just one level of training and powering up after another.

劇透

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