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ClearSkySage
ClearSkySageAuthor4yr
2020-07-09 19:28

Me right now using the hidden forbidden Jutsu the famous glorified Thick Skin no Jutsu or more know as Shameless no Jutsu to give me 5 Stars. muahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahhaha.

Mokuton Authority(Hiatus).

ClearSkySage
4.4
282 Chs

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LunariaN
LunariaNLv5

You got little support because what you do all time is info dump, show training progress and zero character development or world background, no intereactions nothing at all, a dull character hold zero interaction with others didn't see even a single conversation. Sorry buddy but that gave a great hit to our book, you are quite informed about naruto stuffs but your writing sucks (not language not grammar but the way you write 'form' worth nothing) You would have gotten into top 20 at least with this if you got a proper writing form. You can see that most fanfics at least show interactions, simply this is just info dump and details

4yr
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ClearSkySage
ClearSkySageAuthor

this is like the first time I wrote for real so I am still learning stuff as I go, and I know I am really crappy about this stuff but I think I need a bit more of experience to become better.

LunariaN:You got little support because what you do all time is info dump, show training progress and zero character development or world background, no intereactions nothing at all, a dull character hold zero interaction with others didn't see even a single conversation. Sorry buddy but that gave a great hit to our book, you are quite informed about naruto stuffs but your writing sucks (not language not grammar but the way you write 'form' worth nothing) You would have gotten into top 20 at least with this if you got a proper writing form. You can see that most fanfics at least show interactions, simply this is just info dump and details
4yr
5
CliffkunLolRekt
CliffkunLolRektLv6

You making your novel a harem or your future ones a harem?

ClearSkySage:this is like the first time I wrote for real so I am still learning stuff as I go, and I know I am really crappy about this stuff but I think I need a bit more of experience to become better.
4yr
1
Kurigohan
KurigohanLv5

Who mc pairing?

ClearSkySage:this is like the first time I wrote for real so I am still learning stuff as I go, and I know I am really crappy about this stuff but I think I need a bit more of experience to become better.
4yr
1
ClearSkySage
ClearSkySageAuthor

I already have someone in mind, but you can be certain that she won't be from the naruto world.

Kurigohan:Who mc pairing?
4yr
ClearSkySage
ClearSkySageAuthor

I don't do harem.

CliffkunLolRekt:You making your novel a harem or your future ones a harem?
4yr
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BreezyNovels
BreezyNovelsLv5

Can you tell me the pairing?

ClearSkySage:I don't do harem.
4yr
1
ClearSkySage
ClearSkySageAuthor

It's a secret for now, but it's definitely unexpected.

BreezyNovels:Can you tell me the pairing?
4yr
4
Antaxmorro
AntaxmorroLv4

Tienes mi apoyo 👍👍👍👍🏿👍🏻👍🏽👍🏼

4yr
1
gkfk
gkfkLv4

is there any romance

3yr
1
ClearSkySage
ClearSkySageAuthor

gkfk:is there any romance
3yr
2
gkfk
gkfkLv4

the main character will not leave her alone while he is traveling right

3yr
1
ClearSkySage
ClearSkySageAuthor

no.

gkfk:the main character will not leave her alone while he is traveling right
3yr
1
Dmadar4uZuka
Dmadar4uZukaLv1

Harem?

3yr
lectorviciado
lectorviciadoLv1

reanudalo de una puta vez coño

3yr
King_Ali7
King_Ali7Lv4

Any plan on continuing the story. Its been a year.

2yr
1
ClearSkySage
ClearSkySageAuthor

For the moment... No.

King_Ali7:Any plan on continuing the story. Its been a year.
2yr
King_Ali7
King_Ali7Lv4

What about now

ClearSkySage:For the moment... No.
1yr
Other Reviews
nick_maynard
nick_maynardLv14

Please read whole message before forming opinion As of chapter 10 review/personal opinion I personally like the main character's "character type" And really appreciate the author going that eaxtra step to include already existing things from the source material instead of the "let's just use cool stuff from what ever random thing looks cool" I'll also mention that even though the author does make his main character powerful it's not at least at this point in the story off the charts powerful "power trip fantasy" or doing the random now the characters can do this (really hate it when anyone and or anything doesn't follow it's own rules) Main character's capabilities are following a path consistently and the few changes to the path has been shown not one of those random characters doing something that they couldn't possibly do before, than author "explaining why they can do that" Thanks

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DanteSama
DanteSamaLv5

Nice take on the plot 👍 The progress on MC's power and character build up is as real as it can get without outright Op him in short time. A must read Novel !! I totally recommend reading it wholeheartedly!!💯 Thanks for your hard work Author San 🤘

4yr
Zhanye
ZhanyeLv10

If you are looking for some random diary fanfic, that's for you. I've read 28 chapters and I can count the amount of dialogs in my fingers of one hand. It was 28 chapters of the MC just saying "I've trained for 1 year and learned it" time skip for 2 years "I've trained for 2 years and learned that" another time skip... Just a bunch of time skips and the Mc telling what he learned on his time skips.

4yr
Man_Who_Runs
Man_Who_RunsLv10

The idea is good but the way it's brought out is complete dooodooo Just reading it kills my brain cells eventually making me even more stupid than I already am.

4yr
aboshwkey
aboshwkeyLv5

your story is really nice but u do need to put some life in it .. interaction between ppl is what is a story about... try to add more character in and make some conversation dont just keep one point story telling ...

4yr
Heavenly_Devil
Heavenly_DevilLv12

How do I say this without being ‘mean’? It seems it’s not possible. So, I’ll be honest. This whole thing is stupid. If ya gonna do Shit like adding Chinese elements, please place a tag for that! The writing is of poor quality, making me question if I’m retarded for reading this or stupid for continuing... maybe I’m a FUCKING MASOCHIST?! Damn it! I’m out!

4yr
SURPASSEDEMPEROR
SURPASSEDEMPERORLv6

other than being a mokuton user nothing is good in this story. there are lot of grammatical and spelling errors which have not been fixed yet. half of the story is played in authors head and the other half is written down here. to me the worst think of this Fanfic is the conversation style.... it kills all the fun

4yr
Uchiha_Lover21
Uchiha_Lover21Lv2

one thing i hate is an mc that hides he's strength this mc is such a pussy, danzo wont do anything, I mean how else did kakashi survive and wasnt assassinated even though he was a God prodigy, if he showed signs of having wood style he'd be protected because wood style is good against tailed beast

4yr
Gadloner
GadlonerLv5

The story is good but it takes a lot of effort to understand because of some wrong grammar and the MC is very OP so I like it...........All in all its good just need the grammar

4yr
Daoist_ChaosLord
Daoist_ChaosLordLv6

Reveal spoiler

4yr
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