The initial 5 chapters are good but, then it kinda falls down a cliff, hitting every rock on the way down, when it comes to dialogue in chapter 7-8. That's where I dropped this.
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There's Chinese novel like your novel. I hope your novel doesn't go like the Chinese one. ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
At first the story started of good even though it was fast pace but after chapter 6 the story started to go down hill. The idea of the story was good but the the execution was bad in my 'OPINION'.
Good grammer, stable update and okaish character design. But 4 questions. Why does the all spak energy keep depleting if its basically infinite in power. That doesn't make sense to me. why does the system have power over his dimention and yet he doesn't. And lastly for someone who has soposed knowledge of all the multiverse he's not used it once.
Now, this novel is unique and interesting... hopefully it will continue till the end as it has plenty of potential..............................
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Just hoping you won't drop the novel, anyway about the fanfic, the story is original, interesting a bit faced pace but it's Ok, grammar is good, so yup 4.6 stars from me.
A Marvel Transformer Crossover that shows a potential to be a great read. It just need more World Building and Character Developement. The story so far is great!!!!!
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