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Lord Of Hunters - Hunter X Hunter

作者: Adenlia
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Axel wakes up in the world of Hunter x Hunter; he was an avid reader of the series and always wanted to be a hunter and Nen user himself. With a system and an ability, he wants to create his own destiny. For Support and Early Chapters, Check out my patreon page. www.patreon.com/Adenlia - My original book Journey of the Mystic: Sands of Destiny https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0C5TZN29Y

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Chapter 1Chapter 1 - Start Hunter X Hunter

"It's been five days."

Axel whispered to himself.

For the past five days, he has found himself in a different world.

At first, he was quite scared and could not understand anything.

But as the days passed, he realized that the world he was in was not a foreign one.

Axel went into the bathroom, washed his face, and looked at himself in the mirror. He was quite handsome and had a masculine face. green eyes, and thin lips as well full of black hair on the top of his head.

It is hard not to look at him a second time whenever he passes.

"Now, to think simply, I have many things to do."

He said this as he walked out of the bathroom holding a towel and sat at the table next to his window.

The water was still dripping from his face.

He looked outside and took a deep breath.

A few seconds later, "Nen" began to cover his body. Axel was terrified after entering the Hunter X Hunter world for the first time.

A voice in his head asked him to say the words "Status" when he was about to go crazy.

After thinking about these words, everything was clear.

He had come to the world of "Hunter x Hunter."

Within a short time, he begins to practice "Nen," the system; the voice that spoke to him bestowed upon him two abilities in addition to "Nen."

"Heavens Arena"

Axel had easily reached the hundredth floor with his simple nen control and had been spending time on the centennials for some time. It made sense to make money, and at the same time, it had a room of its own.

"A month later, Gon will start his hunting exam. When that time comes, I want to be in that exam. If it is possible" he thought in his mind

He lit a cigarette and waited for his meal in the silence.

-

In a dimly lit bar,

"What do you think, Avak?"

The ugly man in a white cloak asked the children-sized man next to him.

They were drinking cocktails in the bar located in Heaven's Arena.

"I can understand that what you're talking about is important.

"But I don't think the guy named Axel is important to us right now."

"I think you shouldn't think so much, Agra," he said.

Agra took a deep breath and began to watch the sky.

"It's odd that he spends time on 100s as someone who knows how to use NEN."

Agra then kept his silence as he finished his drink.

-

In the room of Axel, everything seemed calm and pretty much good enough.

After eating, Axel climbed onto his bed and closed his eyes.

"I've watched the Hunter X Hunter series many times in my previous life. It was a lot of fun to watch the series when it was aired."

"Now I will continue my Nen training based on the information in the whole series I watched."

"I'm still pretty novice after all."

With these thoughts in mind, Axel began to focus only on "Nen."

He knew, but what he had to do now was build the foundation.

His nen was only at the most basic level. He couldn't even see exactly what category he was in using the "Water Prophecy" yet.

For Support and Early Chapters, check out my patreon page.

www.patreon.com/Adenlia

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Lackada1sical
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Evaluation: Average (Could've been a Gem). WQ: With less to no mistake grammatical errors (Needs improvement of gender-pronouns usage) and a well thought/structured storyline, however, Interaction or dialogues ain't good as it is repetitive and lacking. 3/5 SD: First, this is a canon-compliant FF which was balanced as author-san focus more on MC's own adventure/development without following or hightailing the OG protagonists. With a slow to average pace of development that affects story progression and repetitive dialogues and interaction which affects story progression. 3/5 CD: MC is a transmigrator from earth which is aware of HxHVerse with a simple & non-dependent system golden finger (basic system without quests, store, inventory & etc). He also has a chaotic-neutral persona which is apt for HxHVerse. MC is canon-compliant and is very afraid to meddle on the plot to avoid repercussions & affect his future knowledge which is a letdown. Average in utilizing his foreknowledge of HxHVerse and lacks utilization of his previous life earthly experiences & knowledge that can be applied on HxHVerse. 3/5 US: Based on the plot progression and author-san prolonging the chapters as well as making it short which is also crammed with MC's thought, I'd say the upload and stability matches the quality of this FF which is Subpar. 3/5 WB: This is where author-san hit it big-time as he introduced NeN on a different perspective which much more details, however, exploration of NeN itself is a bit slow as well as discoveries and other adventures that wasn't shown in canon is a bit lacking. 4/5 My opinion: Don't make it too long winded and get in too much details with MC's thought just to prolong plot and chapters as I am aware that you are doing it to entice your readers to delve more in this FF and encourage them in your Patreon as I am not against it. Just decrease it a little bit to avoid your readers annoyance and keep them on their feet on this FF. Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD

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