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Dragon Ball Revised

In an alternate timeline where Paragus reacts more passionately to Broly's execution, he and his friends band together and flee Planet Vegeta! What will this do to the timeline? How will the change in upbringing affect Broly? Find out in Dragon Ball Revised! https://www.patreon.com/EveryLittleHelps - Please consider tipping if you like the novel, I really appreciate it The Fanfiction is written so that even if you are not a fan of Dragon Ball you can still understand what is happening. DISCLAIMER: Broly isn't the main focus until chapter 40! Broly is the main character but there are 40 chapters worth of backstory! Broly however will still be doing Broly things! Also! There are many OC's! The main cast of the story will be made up of the main character in the anime and manga but more than a few OC supporting characters will be introduced! Bare with the wait! DISCLAIMER PART 2!!!: I am a Broly fan as much as the rest of you so I can assure you that Broly will be wiping the floor with the frost demons and stomping his enemies into the dirt, however! My Broly will not a cruel and heartless MC that kills his enemies excessively. Broly, by all means, seeks peace but rest assured there is no shortage of people for him to overcome. Announcement: This novel is not dropped but currently under reconstruction I didn't like the trajectory the story was following so changed it, if some of the plot around the 120-140 chapters seems jumpy, this is why.

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Elemental Control (113)

(Another few days later)

Broly brought his crystal sword out of its metal sheath, admiring the jagged and shiny surface.

Without delay he agitated his ki, commanding it to supply his body with more power.

In an instant, his hair flashed yellow and the aura around him change. He then pumped his ki, which was the same kind of deep green ki that came from his Legendary state, into the sword, the dense and powerful energy converting into elemental power.

FSH!

Crimson red flames shot out from the sword, sparking for a moment before mellowing down and dressing the edge of the blade savagely, giving it a gruesome look. Broly felt the heat sear against his body, his skin wriggling slightly as the intense heat from the sword simmered.

Completely unfazed, Broly channelled his ki towards his eyes, enhancing their functions and allowing him to see the arrangement of the ki-induced fire.

'Hmmm, difficult but not impossible,' he thought to himself, thinking of a way to reproduce the effect.

He threw his burning blade into the air and sent a ripple of ki after it, using telekinesis to suspend without much thought.

Broly took a deep breath, using even the smallest unit of space in his lungs to hold air. He then materialised a small ball of ki in his mouth, the dense sphere crackling slightly as Broly shaped it.

WSH!

Deep red crimson flames burst out from his mouth, scorching the air in front of him dramatically. Broly blew even harder and the deep red flames turned blue, bringing the temperature in the room to a very high number.

Broly exhaled sharply, ceasing his fire breath.

'Not as useful as I thought but it's still a good trick to have up my sleeve'

The fire Broly breathed out wasn't really a beam or concentrated attack, more of a spray that would do Area of Effect damage which was good for many weak people instead of one strong person.

But he already had his Eraser Canon for that.

'Let's move to the next one'

Broly regripped his sword that was stagnant in the air, applying his ki to the hilt this time.

Although the temperature of the room was high and the heat from the sword still lingered, the ice diligently froze over the blade, engulfing and enunciating its edges while creating more tiny ice shards that held their peace in the hot room.

'A little bit more interesting!' Broly thought slightly intrigued.

He concentrated his ki into his palm, allowing the surface to bubble with energy. He then thrust out his hand, allowing a palm-shaped pillar of Ice to grow from it, embedding itself onto the opposite wall before freezing over the whole side.

'I wonder if I can...'

Broly exerted his will over the ice, allowing the single beam to jut out from various points on its length, attaching itself to the walls on the sides, the ceiling and the floor.

'This is a bit too easy' Broly thought, slightly disappointed that he got everything on the first try.

'At least my ki control is getting better,' he thought optimistically.

Broly had a very hard time getting his ki to be 'still' and this was even worse in his Super Saiyan form but he was more or less able to accurately judge the way in which is ki would bubble, vibrate or explode and so he willed it to certain parts of his body as well as allowing his hair to take the excess to mitigate most of the damage.

He was certain that if he wasn't as smart as he was, he would have exploded a long time ago.

Broly then moved on, materialising a new ball of ki in the palm of his hand.

He watched it fizzle, crackle and spark in his hand, letting it move about recklessly.

'Ever since I absorbed the Super Lighting ki crystal, my ki seems to have lighting properties, the piercing issue that Yami mentioned is no longer a problem,' Broly thought as he pushed out one of his fingers, a thin lightning spear instantly rushing forward and cutting air before retreating back.

Broly brought his hand back to his chest.

'But it made the strain on more body worse, if not for my healing factor I would have been in serious trouble, even though it's a slight inconvenience at best it's still a little worrying'

The intensity of low-level stress on Broly's body increased sharply with the new properties of his ki. For the time being, his power level would steadily increase until his body was able to handle the stress easily but that meant that Broly wasn't in a very good position, especially when he planned to take on Frieza as he was already taking weakened, no matter how small, before he was attacked.

'But there's the Legendary form for that'

Broly thought to himself, extremely confident in his own power.

Any cautiousness and strategy promptly went out the window when he entered that state, the destruction of his enemies all but guaranteed.

'That does that! I wonder what Queen Vegeta is up to?'

Broly didn't even bother trying to learn wind-based ki styles as he produces this with his punches alone already.

Broly entered his library, finding her sitting cross-legged on one of his couches, reading something he couldn't see the name of.

'She's beautiful!' Broly exclaimed to himself.

He wasn't quite sure how or why but he would just catch her doing ordinary things and they would appear breathtaking in his eyes, he was extremely unfamiliar with the feeling but he felt a strong longing to be near her but didn't want to disturb her the same.

There were women that were pretty on Sythis but they weren't in the same ballpark as Queen Vegeta, being quantifiable leagues below her appearance.

The mean and irrational comments she made about him seemed to disappear when he saw her, the curvature and contours of her body becoming the more pressing matters in his mind.

"Oh, Broly! You're here! I was having a bit of trouble understanding this..."

Queen Vegeta kept talking but Broly couldn't hear anything, instead spellbound by her appearance.

She stopped talking, realising that Broly wasn't getting a word she was saying.

'Don't tell me he is...'

"Broly!" she said loudly, breaking him from his daze.

"How old are you?" she asked, thinking about something.

"I turn 18 in a few months," Broly said passingly, still trying to figure out what specifically made her so pretty.

Queen Vegeta felt like she was struck by lightning.

'So young! I thought he was at least 30 with that size!' she thought more than slightly surprised.

Broly was taller and more muscular than Nappa and he was around thirty last time she saw him, she couldn't imagine Broly being so much younger than him.

'So he really couldn't do anything' she thought to herself, a tingle of guilt present in her eyes.

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