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Dragon Ball Revised

In an alternate timeline where Paragus reacts more passionately to Broly's execution, he and his friends band together and flee Planet Vegeta! What will this do to the timeline? How will the change in upbringing affect Broly? Find out in Dragon Ball Revised! https://www.patreon.com/EveryLittleHelps - Please consider tipping if you like the novel, I really appreciate it The Fanfiction is written so that even if you are not a fan of Dragon Ball you can still understand what is happening. DISCLAIMER: Broly isn't the main focus until chapter 40! Broly is the main character but there are 40 chapters worth of backstory! Broly however will still be doing Broly things! Also! There are many OC's! The main cast of the story will be made up of the main character in the anime and manga but more than a few OC supporting characters will be introduced! Bare with the wait! DISCLAIMER PART 2!!!: I am a Broly fan as much as the rest of you so I can assure you that Broly will be wiping the floor with the frost demons and stomping his enemies into the dirt, however! My Broly will not a cruel and heartless MC that kills his enemies excessively. Broly, by all means, seeks peace but rest assured there is no shortage of people for him to overcome. Announcement: This novel is not dropped but currently under reconstruction I didn't like the trajectory the story was following so changed it, if some of the plot around the 120-140 chapters seems jumpy, this is why.

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Upgraded? (112)

Opposite Queen Vegeta was a 6'5 savage warrior woman. The sleek muscles on her body expanded again, becoming much wider and firmer, her height increasing by three inches as her body straightened, her hair also became thicker and heavier, bright yellow ki bursting out from her like a valve.

"Congratulations, you've just turned Super Saiyan," Broly said, taking a few steps away from her, admiring her figure.

Queen Vegeta scowled.

"You mean that old legend?" she said, sounding unconvinced, still wanting to attack Broly.

"Hmph!" Broly said transforming.

"How do you feel at the moment?"

"Like ripping your head off," Queen Vegeta said honestly, peeling her eyes at Broly whose hair also turned yellow.

"Remember that emotion and focus on everything in your body, even down to the way you're standing, remember every single detail then force all of your ki towards your spine," Broly said softly, completing the final step of his plan.

Queen Vegeta scoffed.

"Why should I listen to you?" she said, her eyes icy and cold.

Broly's aura changed as his face turning harsh, becoming much more menacing and intimidating.

"Just do it!" he said, his soft and gentle tone gone.

Queen Vegeta flinched but complied, only because Broly was also giving off the same energy she had now acquired.

"HMPH!"

DSH!

The air around her became lighter, her muscles softening and decreasing in size while her hair turned black again.

Queen Vegeta exhaled sharply as she looked back at the mirror, seeing her regular appearance.

"Good, now transform again," Broly said, his tone just as strict.

Queen Vegeta grit her teeth, not liking being commanded but she could tell her current energy was no match for the energy Broly was giving off.

She widened her stance, nearly crouching and gathered her energy, trying to re-create the state she was in a few moments ago. Since the emotion she felt was still fresh in her mind it didn't take much, under the push and pull of her will she forced her body back into Super Saiyan.

"Excellent! Now try as hard as you can to draw ki from your spine, even if there's nothing there, just pull it," Broly said, ordering her smoothly.

"Just what are you making me-"

"I didn't tell you to speak"

Queen Vegeta gnashed her teeth again but complied, using her anger to pull her energy with more force.

DSSSSH!

Her body levitated lowly as the pressure pushed her off the ground, her muscles expanding again and her hair turning an even deeper shade of yellow, her eyes now becoming a greeny-blue colour.

TNK!

Queen Vegeta landed with a thud, crossing her arms and looking at Broly expectantly.

'Fuck'

Broly had never experienced attraction on this scale to another person before, he could tell when something or someone was objectively pretty but never had he felt explicitly the desire for someone else's body before.

'And her Super Saiyan is much more potent than mine as well'

Broly had guessed that her power level had increased somewhere around 42 times.

"This is Super Saiyan, it's a transformation that allows a Saiyan to increase their power dramatically, the legend says that when mastered-"

"A Saiyan can increase their power by 50 times!" Queen Vegeta exclaimed.

Everything became crystal clear in her mind.

Her memory before waking up in the medical machine was really hazy and she was too distracted to bring up what exactly had happened. She only now re-remembered the sequence of events that led to their third fight.

'It wasn't a dream! Then that means that he...'

Broly kept quiet, looking at Queen Vegeta who appeared as if she was having a revelation.

WSH!

She vanished in front of his eyes.

In the silent room, Broly could the sound of something, realising that Queen Vegeta's soft lips found his cheek.

Her breath brushed against his face.

"I don't owe you anything," she said softly before disappearing again, sashaying out of the gym room.

Broly exhaled softly, his heart beating thunderously in his chest.

'What did she do to me?'

Broly was breathing heavily and he found himself off-balance, on the verge of falling over.

He had never seen this technique before.

Queen Vegeta smiled as she made her way out of the room, not looking back as she walked, her enchanting figure swaying from side to side.

'I don't understand that woman at all'

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(5 Days Later)

"This armour is insane," Broly said admiring his reflection.

"Eh, I don't think it's flashy enough," Mr Yellow said, his mechanical brows relaxed as he discredited Broly's fashion sense.

On Broly's torso was an expanding crystalline armour that shimmered lowly.

It was the results of redesigning the traditional Saiyan armour with a lighter and thin material, then synthesising it with flattened fire crystals and allowing the concurrent compound to soak in saturated Lightning and Wind powdered crystal solution.

The following piece of clothing was then thinly lined with ki crystals again, giving it a dim colourful shine.

From his waist he wore the Saiyan sash that Mushro had gifted him which he had also done this rigorous process to, using his tail as a kind of belt to wrap the long red sash around him. Beneath that poked white silky pants and off-white sneakers with a rubber layer on the bottom.

Bluntly said, he was wearing soft crystal-made clothing underneath crystal armour.

He still wore his ki guards which remained untouched out of the fear of blowing up everything in North Galaxy.

"HYAH!" Broly shouted loudly, puffing out his chest as he transformed into a Super Saiyan.

His muscles expanded pushing out against the fabric causing the sleek material to fold over and encase his sash and legs, thickening the armour there while his chest was revealed, bulging biceps and heavyset abs on full display.

"You programmed your clothes?" Mr Yellow said, admiring the work Broly had done.

"Why not?"

At this time Queen Vegeta stepped into the gym, earphones lodged in as she moved.

She was quite addicted to working out, especially when the option had been removed for her for so long.

She gave Broly one look and sighed out.

"Where's mine?" she asked with her arms crossed.

"Where's your what?" Broly asked confused.

"My armour! Where did you put it?" she asked resolutely.

"Uh! Um, ah, well-" Broly stuttered, freezing up.

"It's not finished yet," Mr Yellow interrupted.

"Well go finish it!" Queen Vegeta commanded.

"Ok!" Broly said, leaving the room with a red face.

"Ai Ai Ai!" Mr Yellow said, shaking his metallic head as he followed Broly.

Queen Vegeta smirked as she got to the bench press, changing the weight to twice what it was when she came the last time.

'He's not like the other Saiyans at all' she thought, remembering the face he made.

Life happened again

The trouble is that I don't really have time to be writing chapters for the next two weeks (especially with the big fight that's going to happen) but ironically I have exactly two weeks worth of chapters I can put out at a rate of 1 per day.

The problem is that I can't do the mass release I was planning before with the power stones, so I'll just have to scrap it for now and re-align it later

Especially with how long the story is structured to be, I can understand it's frustrating for the upload rate to be so slow but it really is the best I can do

Thank you for reading!

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