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Dragon Ball- Universe's Strongest Human

作者: AgentMonke
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Not going to be super omega strong, will hover around Goku and Vegeta, but the MC wants to be stronger than Goku! Goes through Dragon Ball- DBZ, DBGT, and DBS. read if you want, or don't~ This is pretty much my respect for Toriyama

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thesacredmenace
thesacredmenaceLv4thesacredmenace

OK, this is the first time I'm writing a review for a fanfic this early but I hope the Author sees this and takes it as constructive criticism. the foundation of the story had tremendous potential with the human MC and fire force power but the MC lost all his brain cells when he transmigrated. He acts like a joke gag character for one-piece instead of a normal person with normal reactions which makes him feel dumb. Also, the dialogue is written too close together making it difficult to know who is talking. Author, I think you should keep the premise for the story but rewrite/edit it so the characters seem realistic instead of dumb

Z_Ril
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Rovontheus
RovontheusLv4Rovontheus

For the first time I'm giving a 1 star review. The story had potential. but that went down the drain after MC acts like a parody character who knows the future but still gets angry. worse of all the writing, sentences and dialogues gets confusing which is annoying. The friendly banter and mocking were nice but the way it was executed and the follow ups was so bad. Plus why tf am i reading cannon DBZ with a slight self insert along with a dumber MC and worse english. All events remain the same and MC like usually weaker than a saiyan. A stupid system too, all items and power from it were irrelevant, if it was relevant the story wont follow cannon. The plot was dumb, the only thing i like was a bit of one piece and one punch man funny elements that were added. There was no anime logic in this book. Author you should improve those points i mentioned. if not i'd rather read Chinese trash MTL. at least i won't have much expectations

Hellycomic
HellycomicLv3Hellycomic

Very bad story , and bad mc . I better search for other Stories

Jhowinchester666
Jhowinchester666Lv1Jhowinchester666

Sinceramente o protagonista virou um figurante e triste dizer, porque a história, tinha muita pontecial, espero que melhore, _&&&&&_______&&&&____&&&__&&&&_&&&&&__&&&__&&&&&____&&&&__&&&__&&&_&&$&_&&&&&__&&__&&&&__&__&&&__&&__&&_&&&_&&&&&&_&&__&&_&&&_&&_&&&$&&&_&&&&&&&&&__&____&___&___&&___&&&___&&____&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&_____&&____&&&&&&&&&&&&&&_____&&__&&&_&$&_&_&&&_

Dragons1112
Dragons1112Lv4Dragons1112

good read [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

dragonsnipe59
dragonsnipe59Lv4dragonsnipe59

Really enjoyed your story with the humor you put in, a little bit disappointed that MC always chase Goku and Vegeta but can never be a little stronger or at least equal to them.

ZephurosStormheart
ZephurosStormheartLv2ZephurosStormheart

I just finished reading "The End," and I wanted to share my thoughts without giving away any spoilers. This fanfiction really captures the essence of Dragon Ball. It doesn't take itself too seriously, which is a key part of what makes Dragon Ball so special. If someone were to complain that a Dragon Ball fanfic isn't serious enough, I would wonder if they truly understand the show. The main character starts out as a regular human and struggles in the beginning, which I found relatable even though he does have a system. The fanfiction feels like a true extension of the early Dragon Ball series, and that feeling continues to grow as the story progresses through the different arcs. The main character is endearing and will make you fall in love with the series all over again, especially with the way he interacts with the rest of the cast. It feels like Goku got the brother he deserves, and the forgotten characters get the attention that was sorely needed. I encourage you to read this fanfiction but try not to approach it with a critical mindset influenced by other works. Dragon Ball has always incorporated humor, and if you approach it too seriously, you might miss the point. Instead, approach it with the same joy and wonder that you experienced when you first watched the series. Now, raise your hands in the air because Goku needs that energy!

Marven123
Marven123Lv14Marven123

love it very sample and very fast paced. need moooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Yasser_El_Habrouk
Yasser_El_HabroukLv4Yasser_El_Habrouk

it's very bad dumb mc and no build up sorry but please don't write anything like that again

Dude_3192
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I came to check out this. I saw this because of your pokemon fiction, and I'll check it out

MapleHinataSyrup
MapleHinataSyrupLv1MapleHinataSyrup

I only have one question, segs??????? ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

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