Z_Ril

you still alive bro? at least update us that u are okay.

Fabulous. Awesome. Fantastic. Goated. THE AUTHOR COOKS.

i've come to reread but then i noticed something. Yorichii created sun breathing when he was fighting muzan. he created breathing styles to perfectly counter him. Therefore sun breathing was created. and now our mc is being just like yoriichi because he created a breathing style to perfectly counter Douma Ultimate moves. i guess you can say he IS yoriichi incarnation.

no mission because if there is one, then it seems like his actions are not because he wants to do it, but because the system told him to. unless the mission system created solely on his wants. so the mission can change base to his goal. no punishment, because failed to achieve your goals is enough of a punishment already. Rewards are a bit complicated, because if he gets stuff that doesn't make any sense, then it would seem like he is destined to win and favored to win. it would seem unfair and not fun in general to watch a warrior fight when he is destined to win. That's my thought at least.

no mission pls

Hades:

After bra exists, she suddenly becomes the MC. she is somehow able to use ikari, super saiyan all at 3 years old. The quality in the writing itself is flawed, lacking so to say. everything is rushed. power up with no emotion (author tried, but failed), sacrifice of a dad and a true warrior is written without evoking a single emotion out of you. it is bland so to say. author didn't listen to readers comment and complaints. it's sad. a disappointment really. just like many dragon ball fanfics out there. he tried to be different, but failed to realize he's the same as everyone else.

first i doubted you. then i read it. then immediately agreed with you. after bra exists, she suddenly becomes the MC. she is somehow able to use ikari, super saiyan all at 3 years old. The quality in the writing itself is flawed, lacking so to say. everything is rushed. power up with no emotion (author tried, but failed), sacrifice of a dad and a true warrior is written without evoking a single emotion out of you. it is bland so to say. author didn't listen to readers comment and complaints. it's sad. a disappointment really. just like many dragon ball fanfics out there. he tried to be different, but failed to realize he's the same as everyone else.

this is bs. This is not dragon ball. this is dragon bullshit.