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Douluo Dalu: Wulin's Legend (HIATUS)

作者: The_Wulin
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Currently on Hiatus. See my patreon below if you wish to continue reading while supporting me. Wulin, an unlucky genius who's talent was restricted due to a brain trauma, died on the days of his final exams. However, this was not the end for him. No longer held back by his previous body's shortcomings, Wulin reincarnates into a world of his choosing with three wishes. (Book contains incest and ecchi. Those who dislike it, think about Dai MuBai and Zhu Zhuqing, they are basically incest.) Sorry about the earlier chapters, it is a mix of inexperienced writing and my virginity disease. It picks up in quality after around chapter 27... My Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/WulinPC It also has a unique Pokemon story. Cover Photo does not belong to me, I nicked it from someone on deviant art. The artist: https://www.deviantart.com/jessada-art/art/Monkey-King-192394526

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Chapter 1Birth of a genius

June 12th, 1998. It was an early Friday morning (look it up), the sky still dark and the streets are silent. The lights are off and the residents are sleeping, except for one building.

In this building there was an especially active room. This room measured around 56 square metres and was painted white all over, without a single blemish. It had lights built into the ceilings, completely lighting the entire room. Weird and advanced machinery decorated the room, with a single bed with multiple straps laid in the centre. A woman, unconscious and strapped to the bed was loomed over by a man and his goons, each of them wearing a mask and matching clothing. The man muttered something to one of the goons, although muffled the goon still understood from experience what the man was saying and handed him a sharp, knife looking object.

The man plunges the blade into the woman's abdomen without hesitation and drags it from one side to the other, leaving a giant wound with blood spilling out everywhere. The goons use a liquid solution to clean the blood off the woman's body in order to let the man have a clear look at the grievous wound he made. The man puts down the knife and shoves both hands into the wound before pulling out what was inside. He holds it up and seems to grin a little, he says "It's a boy!"

That's right, this man and his goons were just an able doctor and his assistants giving this pregnant woman a C-section in the earliest of mornings. A nurse wraps the baby in a towel while another leaves the operating room to notify the husband of the pregnant woman. shortly after, a middle-aged man quickly bursts into the room and spots the baby. The nurse gives the baby to the man, who takes him carefully, and congratulates him "Congratulations on this healthy baby boy sir, what would you like to name him?"

Hearing this the man shivers and almost drops the baby, "Name him? Don't say such silly things, how could I dare name him without my wife's opinion (command). As a respectful husband I shall wait for my wife to wake up before a name is chosen for my son."

The people around the room look at the man with alternating gazes. The women with admiration, the young men with disdain, and the married fathers with pity and understanding. The man then sits next to the bed with his son in his arms and says "See that pretty lady, she is your mother. You must remember, you can do or become anything in this world, but never, I mean never piss her off. I understand that saying this to you now probably has no meaning, but you will come to understand, after all, you are now stuck with her, just like me."

After a few more minutes of talking to the baby a nurse comes and takes the baby to its crib for the night, which serves to give the baby the most comfortable living conditions and monitor the baby for potential defects. The husband stays beside the wife and slowly dozes off to sleep.

Hours later, in the afternoon, the husband is abruptly awoken by a smack across the head "Chen Tian! Why are you still asleep, did you also just give birth?!". Chen Tian's jolts and stands up straight, almost subconsciously giving an army salute. Due to the smack he had slightly dampened eyes, but he put on a heroic expression and says "Dear, I was just taking a little nap, I was courageously guarding you and my child all night and only succumbed to the evil grasps of sleep half an hour ago." The wife glares at Chen Tian, "Do you think I, Chen Xue'er, will fall for your lies anymore! I have been awake for the last hour and you have been fast asleep this whole time. You may have tricked me into marrying you, but you won't fool me again!"

Chen Tian laughs nervously and quickly changes the subject "Dear, what do you think we should name our child? I think it should be something masculine and shows of-"

"His name is Wulin, Chen Wulin."

Chen Tian looks shocked "Eh... Honey, don't I at least have an opinion on his name?"

Xue'er looks at him disdainfully "Of course you can take a part in his name, I graciously let him have your family name, while I will choose his first name."

Chen Tian looks at his wife in anguish but doesn't oppose her decision.

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hello guys , This is a True review and my true feelings ,so don't think that i m angry or don't like ur novel , so i m replying like this. Warning ! Spoiler ! [ included ] { Many places i use ur for your and m for am . and so on . } //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// 1. MC and his 2 future wives r too close from childhood and i think in future too . So no solo adventure or main focus or spotlight on mc [ i kinda can't explain clearly , but listen , Like chinese or other xuanyuan novels (name may be wrong). Where story focus purely on MC ] 2. Incest , i hate such stuff in reality , as i m not hungry of lust , i love my sisters so it's kinda hard to read such things for me. 3. MC too weak , even 3 wishes he literally wasted them. i understand author is trying to make him look not too OP. then don't give such options to begin with only to make him look like an idiot, 4. Of course i know in future he will be da*mn OP and fuc**g strong and may become GOD or you know ( like hongmeng ruler or such a thing which no one have ever reach ) 5. But what we want to see is present , not future. few people will like your story , but for me it's just bad or nuisance , so i m dropping 6. Same line died by truck kun All family died by spirit hall , at least for god sake try something new. this line has become too common. ( i have read many same fan-fic ) 7. Author try to make mc Cold but loving. Ruthless but not over the line. Girl or wives or GF intro should be there but dont force story on base of S*X ( at age of 12 lets loose virginity wtf ). Try to write good content instead of random lines and wasting your precious time on something useless ( at least for me , peace ) 8. Give us a picture of his adventure not random talks and famous cliche and same old lines in case of Fan-Fic , try to improve your creativity ( which i think you r in urgent nee ) . 9. Girl or wives or GF should be there but don't involve so much that it started looking like Romeo Juliet or lover story ok , or some S*X drama . They should appear but not in whole story. 10 MC should adventure alone and make new friends , gf ,wives. Of course dont forget old ones . meat them again in some places , fight along then go on [ just like most of the NOVELS ] Author if ur feeling hurt , i m sorry . But what i said is truth acc. to me , so don't take it on heart and work hard . i believe u will improve and be successful I want to give all the guys an example [ especially to authors who r reading it right now ] The Strongest Legend Of Dragon Ball [ i read it on LNMTL ] but guys have u read it If yes , u will be able to understand what i m going to talk [ https://lnmtl.com/novel/the-strongest-legend-of-dragon-ball ] LINK above A very Cool and Good and Best novel which is ruined by Author like that he would have no idea himself So don't rad it In this MC gf are 2 , later he married both. But main problem whole story around 1000+ Even 1 ch. rarely left where these 2 girls mentioned i not there. Even in final big fight which concern complete universe , these girls were fighting alongside. I just have one plea at least if someone like to make such novel at least mention a tag : Multiple MC or something alike otherwise after sometime it's truly frustrating. OK author i hope u will improve Thanks for reading it all guys now u can go [ Just go man ? ] Bye

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