Different world reincarnation

This is an amazing story. Here is my honest review... Your story is good, and the title and cover are captivating. But you didn't give much detail about what transpired in the synopsis. Your synopsis is too small. Consider making it bigger because as a reader the first thing I check when I see a book before reading it is (a) the title, (b) the cover, (c) the synopsis.

I was drawn in and captivated by the chapters. However, the synopsis may use some work. It's too little. Overall, I think it's awesome. I enjoy it. Your description is quite fascinating. Additionally, I think your writing is charming and polished. I adore it!

a good overall experience and something new

why Stop writing this novel i think this is good

There are things that I feel the story is lacking. There's a lot description and the dialogue is a few. Explaining the world background on first chapter might be good, but in my opinion it's best to explain to reader slowly as the protagonist journey through the story. You could try to imitate a similar novel on how they do to balance the description and dialogue conversation. I believe you will do well as you learn in presenting your story. Overall the book is good, but need morw attention from the author to improve the book to be better🍀

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2 chapter and it is the typical novel where the protagonist has a problem that makes him unable to get stronger, the authors really find it hard to think about anything else, there are also commas missing in the text and you are going to tell me how in just 5 years He knows the situation of the kingdom when he is 5 years old.

Very detailed and beautiful description of the world you've created, Author. I really liked the plot of your story. I don't like long paragraphs but it still was captivating.

I love your novel to the fullest The novel is beautifully crafted, the characters are richly developed, and the story unfolds with breathtaking twists and turns. A literary masterpiece that will leave you awestruck and longing for another chapter. A must-read for all book lovers!!! 😘😘😘

At first, I had my doubts about , but boy, was I wrong! This novel exceeded my expectations and turned out to be a fantastic read. I highly recommend giving it a try. Trust me, you won't be disappointed!

i won't lie ... the cover alone has me hooked.... is it a harem too... if it is then a free-granted collection too.... nice writing and lively characters...

Overall , awesome work. The chapters engaged me and drew me in. But the synopsis could have some improvement. It is too small. Overall, It's really cool. I like it 🧡

The first chapter got me hooked right away.Your description is so interesting.I also think your writing style is clan and nice. I love it !