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Broke: A Clone Wars Tale (Star Wars)

作者: Reis123
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About the story: Clone trooper CT-4063 is a fresh and shiny trooper directly from the clone facilities in Kamino. He is also one of the thousands of clones that take part on the first battle of the Clone Wars. Go with him as he carves his path to the high comand. Important warnings: I had a sudden moment of inspiration, and decided to write it down. I am not doing this to became an author and I might stop at any time. Anyway I am very grateful to anyone who reads and gives his or her support. Also, I do accept suggestions. I don't have ownership over any of the pre-existing characters nor the cover, but I do claim ownership over the characters created by me. PS: this is a Star Wars fiction PS2: There will be no harem or romance whatsoever, essentially because it would be too different from the lore, and also because I don't like it very much. PS3: The protagonist won't have any Force powers. PS4: The first chapters are small, but it gets bigger as the novel go on. As such, the first chapters are in a process of revision to make them more adequate to the rest of the novel. However, the novel doesn't stop because of this. Also, don't forget to join our discord! https://discord.gg/Gdv2arS

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Chapter 1SIR, YES SIR!

"Line up boys! For the last five years we have trained and trained and trained. Now is the time for you all to put this training in a trial of fire!"

The one talking was a clone in a set of armor. The armor had dark red and brown patterns on the chest and arms, with strips of it covering the middle section of the hand.

However, the clone's most distinguishing feature was his helmet. It was covered with brown panting on top, and there were two stylized ox horns on the front. Although the armor was as shiny as the one any other clone was wearing, it gave off a strong and dignified vibe.

Before he was twenty-five rows, each one with twenty clones. The clone took a step to the side and said.

"Now pay attention to General Di. He wants to say a few things before we set off."

A man with orange skin came from behind the clone talking. He had small thorns all over his face and his skin looked cracked. The man - a Nikto - wore brown robes with a black belt. Hanging on the belt was a metallic stick, carefully crafted to fit his hand. The Nikto looked at the clones and presented himself.

"Thank you commander Keeli. I am Jedi Master Ima-Gun Di. You can call me General Di, as Keeli here seems to like."

General Di paused for a moment and looked at the clones in the first row.

"Men, you are clones and you were breed for battle.

You were breed to fight for the Republic.

However, you are also a person. You have desires and emotions like anyone else.

So, if you want to let those emotions out and become true citizens of the Republic we have to finish this war as soon as possible!

Understood?!"

Hundreds of voices replied at the same time.

"SIR, YES SIR!!!"

After the small presentation General Di and Commander Keeli walked along the rows of men, doing some small talk with them.

Suddenly an officer ran to General Di and said something to him.

"Sir, Admiral Dao just received the order. We are ready to go."

General Di thanked the officer before turning and saying something to Commander Keeli. Keeli listened and want back to the front.

"Attention! All right boys, we are good to go. Everyone check your weapons and get on the Laat Gunships. NOW!"

Commander Keeli, together with General Di and twenty or so troopers. With a low sound, the doors of the lower hangar of the destroyer they were opened and the Laats started pouring down.

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Well, it's me, the author, again. First of all, I want to say that this is the second review I did of my novel, but, considering that the first one was when the novel had only one chapter, and I didn't know how to write, or, actually, I didn't know anything at all. So, I will soon delete the first review I did, and leave only this one. Now that we got that out of the way, let's talk about the novel. The first thirty, maybe forty chapters are from when I had just started writing, and had no idea how to do it, at least not well. I plan to, after the story is finished, revisit those chapters, correct grammar, and expand them to match the ones after fifty or so. So, I ask you all to give the novel a chance, even if it doesn't seem exactly awesome at the start. Please remember I am I'm not a native English speaker, although I have made up for that, and started correcting my grammar mistakes as soon as I realized I really liked to write, and I didn't want the novel to be unreadable Trash. Also important, although I tried to make things as similar to the original lore of Star Wars and Clone Wars, some things are different. It is a fan-fic after all. Lastly, I, as the author, am always open to suggestions and ideas, and, unless you are being extremely rude for no reason (it never happened, but who knows), I will always accept those comments, although I might not follow what you, as the reader, wants. I think that is all, so, thanks for reading until here, and I hope you enjoy the novel!

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This is definitely one of the best stories on this site, or any site for that matter - it has all the hallmarks of a good story: good quality of writing, interesting and varied characters, solid character development and much more. It explores the relationships between its characters, following the tale of a group of OC clones in the star wars universe and their relationships with both Canon and OC characters. The plot is not particularly complex if you know star wars lore, primarily from the prequels and the clone wars series, with a few cameos from the original trilogy, Rogue One, Rebels, the Republic Commando games and the Jedi: Fallen Order game, but it explores elements that we only really get to see in the Clone Wars themselves, such as what it really means to be a clone and the physical and psychological turmoil that they all go through, with all their highs and lows, their friendships and brotherhood, and their hatreds and revenge. The plot line is solid, with logical actions and reactions by the cast and explores the deeper, less apparent consequences of some choices and events from the movies, games and I believe some comics, without merely being a rehash of old material. Also, it's a clone-centric story, which serves to make it an even rarer gem. The story keeps you teetering on the edge, never knowing what is going to happen to the characters, how they are going to get out of a tight spot or if that will be their last fight. There are a few plot twists that have proven most entertaining, but, much like the timeline it is set in, the place where the novel truly shines is its apex, in an ending which has sealed its place among my favourite reads ever - it is unpredictable in its predictability, because the story follows Canon events to a T, but it forges its very own plot line and, although you may already know the way events are going to go for the overall galaxy and be capable of seeing certain events coming, you keep hoping for a happy ending in a tale that, by its very premise, is bound to have none; yet at the end of its crescendo, in its final, heartwrenching moment, there is that one spark of hope and victory that brings a bittersweet smile among all your tears. Perfection 👌🏻

Ren0Zero
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To begin with I'd like to highlight the positive aspects of the story. The consistency of updates, the grammar etc. The author wrote that the story was created in a burst of inspiration and now there are 100 chapters. The first 50 are small ones but the author is improving and enlargening his chapters. The story itself follows the clone wars and that is bo problem. The focus is not the background story or anything like that. We follow a squad of clones through their battles and the ranks. No complaints here. Now to the rating: Writing quality: 4 stars I'm giving the writing quality 4 stars simply cause 5 stars is almost perfection. For me a 5 star rating has that tiny bit of flow that makes me forget time and place. For me 4 stars is the best I normally give. Stability of updates: 5 stars One per day and so one. No complaints, consistent, perfect. Story Development: 5 stars We follow a squad of clones and have a mix between banter, moral questions(not necessarily for clones), fights and mourning. It is captivating to follow this squad through their fights. Character development: 4 stars I'm giving 4 stars since I believe that the real development has yet to come, he/they might develop affection, friendship etc. His nightmares make the story especially interesting since we know what those mean. Will he follow through with Order 66? Who knows! World background: 4 stars It's Star Wars. You have a literal universe of content to choose from. I'm still hoping for something original in the later parts of the story.

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