To begin with I'd like to highlight the positive aspects of the story. The consistency of updates, the grammar etc. The author wrote that the story was created in a burst of inspiration and now there are 100 chapters. The first 50 are small ones but the author is improving and enlargening his chapters. The story itself follows the clone wars and that is bo problem. The focus is not the background story or anything like that. We follow a squad of clones through their battles and the ranks. No complaints here. Now to the rating: Writing quality: 4 stars I'm giving the writing quality 4 stars simply cause 5 stars is almost perfection. For me a 5 star rating has that tiny bit of flow that makes me forget time and place. For me 4 stars is the best I normally give. Stability of updates: 5 stars One per day and so one. No complaints, consistent, perfect. Story Development: 5 stars We follow a squad of clones and have a mix between banter, moral questions(not necessarily for clones), fights and mourning. It is captivating to follow this squad through their fights. Character development: 4 stars I'm giving 4 stars since I believe that the real development has yet to come, he/they might develop affection, friendship etc. His nightmares make the story especially interesting since we know what those mean. Will he follow through with Order 66? Who knows! World background: 4 stars It's Star Wars. You have a literal universe of content to choose from. I'm still hoping for something original in the later parts of the story.
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