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TheFallen99
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2021-03-21 09:05

This is definitely one of the best stories on this site, or any site for that matter - it has all the hallmarks of a good story: good quality of writing, interesting and varied characters, solid character development and much more. It explores the relationships between its characters, following the tale of a group of OC clones in the star wars universe and their relationships with both Canon and OC characters. The plot is not particularly complex if you know star wars lore, primarily from the prequels and the clone wars series, with a few cameos from the original trilogy, Rogue One, Rebels, the Republic Commando games and the Jedi: Fallen Order game, but it explores elements that we only really get to see in the Clone Wars themselves, such as what it really means to be a clone and the physical and psychological turmoil that they all go through, with all their highs and lows, their friendships and brotherhood, and their hatreds and revenge. The plot line is solid, with logical actions and reactions by the cast and explores the deeper, less apparent consequences of some choices and events from the movies, games and I believe some comics, without merely being a rehash of old material. Also, it's a clone-centric story, which serves to make it an even rarer gem. The story keeps you teetering on the edge, never knowing what is going to happen to the characters, how they are going to get out of a tight spot or if that will be their last fight. There are a few plot twists that have proven most entertaining, but, much like the timeline it is set in, the place where the novel truly shines is its apex, in an ending which has sealed its place among my favourite reads ever - it is unpredictable in its predictability, because the story follows Canon events to a T, but it forges its very own plot line and, although you may already know the way events are going to go for the overall galaxy and be capable of seeing certain events coming, you keep hoping for a happy ending in a tale that, by its very premise, is bound to have none; yet at the end of its crescendo, in its final, heartwrenching moment, there is that one spark of hope and victory that brings a bittersweet smile among all your tears. Perfection 👌🏻

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Reis123
Reis123Author

Wow! I rarely get such in-depth reviews of the novel. Even as the author, it made me want to read it! That makes me really happy, because it means you truly loved the story! I'm glad to see you enjoyed it, and thanks for the support!

TheFallen99
TheFallen99Lv4

My pleasure, it really was a joy to read 😁👍🏻 I really lost myself in the story, must have read close to 100 chapters in a day haha Keep up the good work, Reis! 😉👋🏻

Reis123:Wow! I rarely get such in-depth reviews of the novel. Even as the author, it made me want to read it! That makes me really happy, because it means you truly loved the story! I'm glad to see you enjoyed it, and thanks for the support!
NoHaremPlease
NoHaremPleaseLv3

is there romaance?

TheFallen99:My pleasure, it really was a joy to read 😁👍🏻 I really lost myself in the story, must have read close to 100 chapters in a day haha Keep up the good work, Reis! 😉👋🏻
TheFallen99
TheFallen99Lv4

No, not really. It's the story of a clone, surrounded by clones, fighting against droids, with the occasional appearance of non-clone characters, but while they do play an important part overall, they are mostly peripheral to the story, with few exceptions. Not much room for conventional romance in this setting, it's mostly about friendship, family, duty and death, with a sprinkle of some other stuff. Still a beyond excellent read though, wish I could forget the plot just to be able to rediscover it all over again. Oh, and beware of the feels - sometimes, they hit you pretty damn hard 😢😅

NoHaremPlease:is there romaance?
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Reis123
Reis123Author

Well, it's me, the author, again. First of all, I want to say that this is the second review I did of my novel, but, considering that the first one was when the novel had only one chapter, and I didn't know how to write, or, actually, I didn't know anything at all. So, I will soon delete the first review I did, and leave only this one. Now that we got that out of the way, let's talk about the novel. The first thirty, maybe forty chapters are from when I had just started writing, and had no idea how to do it, at least not well. I plan to, after the story is finished, revisit those chapters, correct grammar, and expand them to match the ones after fifty or so. So, I ask you all to give the novel a chance, even if it doesn't seem exactly awesome at the start. Please remember I am I'm not a native English speaker, although I have made up for that, and started correcting my grammar mistakes as soon as I realized I really liked to write, and I didn't want the novel to be unreadable Trash. Also important, although I tried to make things as similar to the original lore of Star Wars and Clone Wars, some things are different. It is a fan-fic after all. Lastly, I, as the author, am always open to suggestions and ideas, and, unless you are being extremely rude for no reason (it never happened, but who knows), I will always accept those comments, although I might not follow what you, as the reader, wants. I think that is all, so, thanks for reading until here, and I hope you enjoy the novel!

Ren0Zero
Ren0ZeroLv12

To begin with I'd like to highlight the positive aspects of the story. The consistency of updates, the grammar etc. The author wrote that the story was created in a burst of inspiration and now there are 100 chapters. The first 50 are small ones but the author is improving and enlargening his chapters. The story itself follows the clone wars and that is bo problem. The focus is not the background story or anything like that. We follow a squad of clones through their battles and the ranks. No complaints here. Now to the rating: Writing quality: 4 stars I'm giving the writing quality 4 stars simply cause 5 stars is almost perfection. For me a 5 star rating has that tiny bit of flow that makes me forget time and place. For me 4 stars is the best I normally give. Stability of updates: 5 stars One per day and so one. No complaints, consistent, perfect. Story Development: 5 stars We follow a squad of clones and have a mix between banter, moral questions(not necessarily for clones), fights and mourning. It is captivating to follow this squad through their fights. Character development: 4 stars I'm giving 4 stars since I believe that the real development has yet to come, he/they might develop affection, friendship etc. His nightmares make the story especially interesting since we know what those mean. Will he follow through with Order 66? Who knows! World background: 4 stars It's Star Wars. You have a literal universe of content to choose from. I'm still hoping for something original in the later parts of the story.

goddeth
goddethLv4
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