Well.... The grammar and world background are Excellent, there are only very few chapters so far but it's quite good but not much can be said about character design and story development with so few chapters but we will see. The MC seems to be an original demon?, extremely handosome, full of muscle, very tall, with long black hair, red eyes and red horns, without past who seemly was created the moment Luise summoned him as a familiar. It seems to be VERY strong. So for him, Luise is his creator, thus, everything for him. MC also very very lustful, So him being an Incubus may fit. I quite liked it so far.
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