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[DISCONTINUED] HP: A Bolt from the Blue

作者: Ashtar29
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[A Harry Potter AU Fanfiction] Meet Aayan Barak, a 17 year-old whose life came to an unfortunate end after he was struck by lightning during a storm on his way back from work. After waking up in the body of a newborn in a world not too dissimilar from his own, will Aayan be able to navigate his way through the ups and downs of his new life while trying to discover the mysteries magic has to offer? Read on to find out! ********************************************** Hi everybody! Ash here. I'm a completely new author and this is my very first novel/fanfiction. There's a few things I'd like to get out of the way before you go on to read the novel. This is probably going to be quite similar to other fanfictions you've read considering the Harry Potter fanfiction community is a very large one. I'll do my best to put my own spin on it but do keep in mind that there's only so much I can do that hasn't already been done. Secondly, this is a story that is inspired by FictionOnlyReader's "HP: A Magical Journey" and SnollyGoster609's "HP: I Have Magic." I, for one, would like to express my admiration for these two wonderful humans and the hours of reading time they've provided for me, as well as several other people on this platform and if you haven't read their stories, I'd very much recommend for you to do so. --------------------------------------------------------------------------- DISCORD SERVER: https://discord.gg/HT3VeC26fb --------------------------------------------------------------------------- DISCLAIMER: I do not own any of the characters in this story barring my original ones nor do I own the image used on the cover. As a wise man once said, "Harry Potter is J.K Rowling's playground and I am just happy to be playing in it." (Or something along those lines)

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Chapter 1Chapter 1— Life before the thunder

~Fun Fact: Did you know that it is very unclear how much time goes by between certain events between the 31 October and 1 November. In the novels, it is said that a whole day passes between when James and Lily died and when Hagrid arrives at Privet Drive, Hagrid and Harry are missing, or unaccounted for, for nearly 24 hours.

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It was 8pm in the evening. A storm raged outside as a young man with curly black hair, blue eyes and chocolate brown skin sat at the till in a corner store mindlessly looking out of the window at the storm raging outside. That young man was unfortunately me.

"Make sure to hand me the cash out of the till once your shift is over Omar!" My boss hollered from the staff room.

"Alright!" I shouted back.

'Damn shitty old man, forcing me to work overtime and not even properly paying me!'

I sighed in annoyance as I drew my gaze from the window and towards my boss; Armand. Armand was a frighteningly overweight old man with receding slicked back hair and seemed to be in his mid 50s. Although he was kind to me when it mattered; he was also an absolute slave driver. He took every opportunity possible to make sure that he got the bang for his buck in terms of my work and considering I wasn't actually 18 yet, I couldn't be paid the minimum wage of an adult. Well I could, but Armand wasn't legally obliged to do so and therefore didn't.

Life wasn't always like this for me. Ask any of my teachers and you'd find that I was a pretty gifted psychology student— if I do say so myself. However, that all changed after the death of my mother. It didn't help that my father wasn't present in my life meaning I had to become the sole provider for myself and my three siblings.

Shaking my head in a futile attempt to rid myself of these negative thoughts, I returned to looking out of the shop window at the tumultuous weather outside. I focused on the sound of the heavy rain as I felt a pang of sadness in my chest. The memories of mum were bittersweet; not as painful as they once were but something that I would always both love and hate.

(Flashback)

The school bell rang signalling the end of the school day. The sky was a shade of unremarkable grey, yet that could do nothing to hamper Omar's happiness. A younger Omar, looking to be around five, ran towards a woman with a black coat who was waiting outside the school gate amongst a crowd of other parents and their children. She had shoulder length black hair that was pulled back back into a ponytail; dark blue eyes, brown skin and a heart-shaped face that expressed nothing but overwhelming love for her son.

"Mama, mama!" Bawled a younger Omar with tears threatening to stream down his face.

"Yes, little one?" His mother replied, patting his head affectionately.

"Wh- why does everyone have a daddy except for me?!" He hiccupped while his mother looked at him sadly.

"Your daddy isn't around anymore" She stated quietly, melancholy visible on her face. "But that doesn't mean he doesn't love you. In fact your daddy will always be watching over you." she said

"Mama, where is daddy?" Younger Omar questioned.

"He's at a special place that people go once they finish their journey in life. Once you finish your own, you can go and see daddy okay?" She said as she stuck out her hand for Omar to hold on.

"Okay!" He replied happily as he grabbed onto her hand as they began to walk home.

Life only got better after that. The ensuing years were spent in happiness and bliss with the arrival of my 3 younger siblings. Time went on as I was admitted into a good high school; graduated and then went to college to study psychology. But it all went wrong when mum was diagnosed with late stage liver cancer. The doctors said that they may have been able to save her if she was diagnosed sooner; however it was too late. The cancer had already spread to other places and was no longer isolated in her liver. A few months later, she died in her bed after refusing to be admitted to hospital knowing full well that we couldn't afford it.

Soon after her death, I had to drop out of college both due to mental strain and the responsibility to provide for my growing siblings. My maternal grandparents were in Africa and had no means of coming to England so the only viable option for me was to drop out and find paying work instead.

The shop doorbell rang as a sleep deprived office worker stepped through the door, disturbing me from my musing.

"Welcome to Armand's mini-mart sir! What can I get you?" I asked in a faux happy voice. Moments later, a spiritless black haired man with droopy eyes dragged his feet to the counter.

"Just this six pack of beer please…" He mumbled tiredly, suppressing a yawn.

"Of course sir." I replied, scanning the pack of beer.

'Fucking hell, this dude looks like he hasn't had a good nights sleep in days. Though it's not like I'm any better right now…'

"That'll be £6.50 sir." I stated as the black haired man fished around his wallet for a £10 note. Opening the till, I took the note from the man and handed him his change.

"Have a nice evening sir!" I called out with a fake smile as the black haired man trudged out the door, grunting noncommittally..

"Hey Boss!" I said, turning to face the room behind me.

"What? You damned brat!" Yelled Armand jokingly.

"I'm calling it a day" I replied as he carried the till into the office.

"Alright, get the hell out of here and take that bottle of Pepsi for your siblings" He said from the sofa, waving his hand at a two litre bottle contained inside the mini-fridge adjacent to the television.

"Ha! As if that'd make up for the hours of overtime I've worked!" I retorted..

"What, so you're saying that you don't want the Pepsi?" Asked Armand, a greedy glint in his eyes.

"Oh hell no! Of course I want the Pepsi! It's free ain't it?" I spluttered as I picked up the bottle and ran straight out the shop door.

"Make sure you're here bright and early tomorrow!" I heard Armand yell as the shop door closed behind me, the bell overhead ringing.

I looked down at my phone; my eyes widening in shock.

"Ah Shit! I'm late for the family dinner" I exclaimed, sprinting down the pavement.

Thunder cracked overhead as I weaved and dodged in between the multitude of office workers coming back from work.

Suddenly, there was a flash of light as the smell of ozone filled the air.

My body jolted with shock as I crumpled to the floor dazed, my arms tingling.

'Lord above! Of all the ways to go out, struck by lightning. And I have a sinking suspicion that I won't be waking up with super speed after this'. I thought.

Despair gripped my heart as I came to the realisation that I wouldn't make it back to my siblings. Everything in my life, be it joy or sorrow, was gone; reduced to ashes. Reflecting on my life and the situation that I was currently in; my despair subsided and was replaced with a calm acceptance after I realised that there was truly nothing that I could do.

'Fuck man, at least there's a sizeable amount of money for them to use after I die and it's a good thing I wrote a will to tell everybody what to do in case of my death; can't be too cautious. Grandma and Grandpa should be able to take care of them with the money left if they can make it here...' Were my last thoughts before I drifted off into the cold embrace of death.

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DISCORD SERVER: https://discord.gg/HT3VeC26fb (See paragraph comment)

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to be honest this is an incredible fanfic rather slow but it is not unpleasant, I like that you help harry so that he is not manipulated by the old goat, and the mc does not go with harry just because, as they do in other fanfics, the mc has his own thoughts and helps harry because he met him at school and because he can, other fanfics the mc helps harry just because he is harry and they form the golden cartouche (golden triangle) that does not make sense, for example: if you have the opportunity from going to a world of magic you will want to make your own story learn MAGIC, not getting into the lives of others just because it is harry; You do not help the homeless even knowing that they do not have a roof or food, you help only if you can, this type of thinking is wrong, I do not lose it, but this is how the real world works, you do not see a particular person helping but NGO organizations or programs of carida. In a few words I know that this does not really go with the plot since Harry always has to be included or at least related to the plot, but if I could go to the world of Harry Potter, I would learn magic of all kinds: rituals , curses, animagus, charms, transfiguration, others and I was not aware of harry because I would be doing my thing, and it would only help if I could, since harry is from the beginning being manipulated by the old goat they do not believe me the weasleys are pure blood they can travel to the train station with flu or apparition powders, they do it walk as if they were normal people and their first generation wizard or muggle born children. Regarding the story, it seems great to me, author please continue and do not suffocate, calm down, breathe and continue please.

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Here's my honest review as the author of this fic. It is my first fic but that won't change how I judge this. I'll hold it to the standard I expect from things I would read. 1) My MC isn't emotionless or one a reader cannot sympathise with. I feel like if there is anything I've done right in the creation of this fic, it's my MC. He ended up being the same exact way I imagined him to be in my head. 2) The story itself. As it is right now, it's too early to judge. However, I can say I am doing my best to make this a story I would enjoy. I write this story while holding onto the multiple reviews I've read on my favourite fics and trying to write in a way that seems fun to reader and IS fun for me. 3) Power-ups. Ah~ the infamous killer of all fics. Writers getting too hyped and then overpowering their MCs is one of the main things that result in authors writing themselves into a corner. I want this fic to be decently long. Therefore, the major power-ups will be few and far between. 4) Whether or not it will follow the canon. This is what makes or breaks the fanbase of a fic. There are those who want a pragmatic MC who meticulously manipulates the canon from the shadows. I cannot do that for two reasons. One, I have no experience writing pragmatic and cold MCs. And two, my MC is my own self insert. The way he acts is more or less how I would act. Now that does come with its own ups and downs. It makes it easier to write in first person yet your own views and beliefs bleed into your character. E.g. my dislike and utter contempt for the Dursleys. All in all, I'd say give my fic a go. If you like it, you like it. And if you don't, then leave suggestions as to how I can improve in the chapter comments. That'll be all folks. Enjoy the fic! Yours Truly, —AshestoDust

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