Avid fan of the author here. I’ve read a bit of this story and I just want to say, it reads like a train wreck. Theres just something wrong about how the sentences are structured and the frequent syntax errors. Im sure the story will be top tier given the authors track record, but unless the writing quality is improved/revised, then its going to be a huge immersion killer.

Alright, time to dive into another story

It’s alright personally I think there are more Pokémon fics like this that are better but it’s far from the worse. The first few chapters felt like a chore to read but it slowly starts to get better. Will probably update this as more chapters come out

With a "SYSTEM" story.

I like it, slow burn and tons of details. Don't know much of Pokemon except the first anime. Appreciate the Pokemon pics in the comments.

It’s ok. But the author has this terrible habit of just summarizing instead of telling the story. This has happened in other of his stories. The whole apathy stuff is wierd . The way the Jenny and nurse joy reacted is also so wierd . I had to drop this because of the points mentioned above. I hope the author starts telling the story instead of summarizing.

way too cruel and apathy he doesn't think about his actions and consequences

That story is absolutely perfect whith a realistic pokemon world and great MC

I like.