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DaoistWsow5ULv34mth
2024-09-03 19:51

It’s ok. But the author has this terrible habit of just summarizing instead of telling the story. This has happened in other of his stories. The whole apathy stuff is wierd . The way the Jenny and nurse joy reacted is also so wierd . I had to drop this because of the points mentioned above. I hope the author starts telling the story instead of summarizing.

A random pokemon journey

loskro
4.3
282 Chs

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Kwetzal_Lag
Kwetzal_LagLv5

Alright, time to dive into another story

1yr

Webnovel_Baller
Webnovel_BallerLv1

Avid fan of the author here. I’ve read a bit of this story and I just want to say, it reads like a train wreck. Theres just something wrong about how the sentences are structured and the frequent syntax errors. Im sure the story will be top tier given the authors track record, but unless the writing quality is improved/revised, then its going to be a huge immersion killer.

1yr
Jackoftrades
JackoftradesLv3

It’s alright personally I think there are more Pokémon fics like this that are better but it’s far from the worse. The first few chapters felt like a chore to read but it slowly starts to get better. Will probably update this as more chapters come out

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InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1

With a "SYSTEM" story.

1yr
adn53
adn53Lv1

I like it, slow burn and tons of details. Don't know much of Pokemon except the first anime. Appreciate the Pokemon pics in the comments.

1yr
sandesh_gavali
sandesh_gavaliLv4

way too cruel and apathy he doesn't think about his actions and consequences

6mth
JustDK
JustDKLv13

giving this story 5 star across the board because of how unique it is. Has a system but everything is randomize. Not a collect them all pokemon style fic, but rather a few (currently) op close pokemons. So far gym battles are few in number unlike other stores where they go for 10 or 20 chapters just for a few battles. More focused on the wild life aspect.

1yr
Tartar_Dart
Tartar_DartLv2

Isn't it supposed to be a no harem story? Why is Mc showing his interest in having lot of conquests?

4mth
Phoenixslayer4
Phoenixslayer4Lv15

That story is absolutely perfect whith a realistic pokemon world and great MC

1yr
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