what a waste, having such a beautiful pen and making such a muddy story, the first chapter is important to make you want to follow up, and I don't want to continue. I don't feel like reading nobility, I don't feel like reading TVD, but something that looks like a good story without being one. I don't get the impression that you read many books before writing this story in the sf genre but more criminal novels like Agatha Cristy. good luck
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