If you can't stand a newbie writer, then this story isn't for you. I'm learning how to write a proper story through this fanfic, so I might make a lot of mistakes. Before adding a review, please make sure to list the things that you think could be improved. I'll consider them while writing!

This story is awesome keep reading it gets better and I hope that mc goes for Erza,Mira,and Edolas Erza all badass chicks hope the author keeps up the story

Mc is supposed to be strong, strong that only zeref and that black dragon whatever his name is can match natsu, but nooooo, the author nerfed him so bad that the mc gotta struggle againts jellal just to beat him, he gotta use his god form or whatever just to beat jellal(not kill) so nope, a waste of time, read 100 chap just to get disappointed with the author nerfing the mc just cuz he wants to, he couldve just beat jellal and be done with it but he made it a long ass 6-7 chap fighting jellal and talking none-stop, typical anime sht

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Hum frankly I'm a little bummed out to read that he already reached guildarts level so fast. What will he do now? Guildarts is one of the strongest characters in the anime. If he is already so strong at the start, what kind of ******* can still exist in the fight? Anyway the story itself isn't bad. He wasn't too accurate with the character way of acting, but the error margin isn't that large. So this story is a little standard with an OP mc and harem. I don't mind the harem but I don't really like becoming OP too fast since that destroy any form of *******. Still all in all this story isn't bad. I don't like it but I don't hate it either. I could recommend it to some friends who like the OP kind.

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I love everything but **** the MC for dating Mari first. I don’t fucking agree with that. Erza and The MC we’re friends first and the MC liked her too. But Mari comes in and acts like ***** in my opinion. She goes to the MC and tries to kiss. Fuck this *****. Your making this story a drama novel man. This **** is actually like drama🤣

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Its a good book all in all but i hope that the writer can remove his traveling sicknes. next world can be NARUTO, remove the power up mode cliche let him use his base form to fight. power ups usualy remove the intensity of a match. let him create his own divinity. Like how kratos killed ares so you know. Has allot of potential. Dont give up and write I do wish to see him go to The desolate era Do not give him complex magic names such as fire dragon god etc boring. Too cliche I see you doing things that other writers dont do that you actualy focus on your charecter than yr harem and im proud And dont OP him too much He cn atleast learn every element