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Minachio_Koulen
Minachio_KoulenLv24yr
2020-01-12 09:25

Its a good book all in all but i hope that the writer can remove his traveling sicknes. next world can be NARUTO, remove the power up mode cliche let him use his base form to fight. power ups usualy remove the intensity of a match. let him create his own divinity. Like how kratos killed ares so you know. Has allot of potential. Dont give up and write I do wish to see him go to The desolate era Do not give him complex magic names such as fire dragon god etc boring. Too cliche I see you doing things that other writers dont do that you actualy focus on your charecter than yr harem and im proud And dont OP him too much He cn atleast learn every element

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Nikolas_Sanchez
Nikolas_SanchezLv3

Are you stupid? You act like us other readers wanna see him have to repeat the same process every world he goes to. There was no point in you even reading this novel. You might as well of read any other fanfiction because once he loses his dragon slayer magic, he might as well be any other random joe who got reincarnated.

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