Item: Natsu Dragneel traveling the Multiverse
Rating: 3

Venom_GodLv124yr

2020-01-10 01:22

I love everything but **** the MC for dating Mari first. I don’t fucking agree with that. Erza and The MC we’re friends first and the MC liked her too. But Mari comes in and acts like ***** in my opinion. She goes to the MC and tries to kiss. Fuck this *****. Your making this story a drama novel man. This **** is actually like drama🤣

Natsu Dragneel traveling the Multiverse

Xumit

4.5

112 Chs

Liked by 5 people

Replies4

XumitAuthor

Thanks for the review anyway! I needed some critiques. It's boring reading positive reviews 😅

4yr

Venom_GodLv12

😂I love everything you do man, but I think you're taking it too far with the drama. MC is not even trying to go get her man. This actually feels like drama tv shows were a girl and guy fights almost every season and they cheat on each other. Please fix this shit. Just make the MC tell his woman the truth. It's pissing me off. So much Dramaaaaaa Author. And it’s kinda making me hate the MC because of this. He does not know how to make his harem. MC makes the women sad but does not even fix it even though it’s his fault. He should have just went up to her and told her he wants her too, not avoid her and make her sad. I Really Feel like your just doing this to make more chapters. And probably there is going to drama like this. This fanfic is going to turn in to drama, misunderstanding type SHIT. PLEASE AUTHOR DONT MAKE NO MISUNDERSTANDINGS SHIT. AND JUST MAKE THE MC TELL ERZA OR THE OTHER WOMAN HE WANTS THAT HE WANTS HAREM, IS IT REALLY THAT HARD TO THAT. PLEASE AUTHOR......😭😭😭😭😭😤😤😤

Xumit:Thanks for the review anyway! I needed some critiques. It's boring reading positive reviews 😅

4yr

Minachio_KoulenLv2

I disagree going for erza is too cliche i like the writers toughts

4yr

Yuri_is_NtrLv5

Totally agree, we need to dis all this popular girls/best wifu material and go for some bland or someone without enough time to make a proper character..... Eh, maybe this one crazy girl who try and make robo-dragon? I don't even remember her name, must be original enough! Though, no one give a damn about her..... Wow, I was total dick, and for what? As a honorable otaku/degenerate, I would say- you don't understand the hearts of men!!!

Minachio_Koulen:I disagree going for erza is too cliche i like the writers toughts

4yr

Other Reviews

XumitAuthor

If you can't stand a newbie writer, then this story isn't for you. I'm learning how to write a proper story through this fanfic, so I might make a lot of mistakes. Before adding a review, please make sure to list the things that you think could be improved. I'll consider them while writing!

4yr

GodhaseoLv6

This story is awesome keep reading it gets better and I hope that mc goes for Erza,Mira,and Edolas Erza all badass chicks hope the author keeps up the story

4yr

IkkarusLv14

Mc is supposed to be strong, strong that only zeref and that black dragon whatever his name is can match natsu, but nooooo, the author nerfed him so bad that the mc gotta struggle againts jellal just to beat him, he gotta use his god form or whatever just to beat jellal(not kill) so nope, a waste of time, read 100 chap just to get disappointed with the author nerfing the mc just cuz he wants to, he couldve just beat jellal and be done with it but he made it a long ass 6-7 chap fighting jellal and talking none-stop, typical anime sht

4yr

karam555Lv5

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4yr

RedLawLv13

Hum frankly I'm a little bummed out to read that he already reached guildarts level so fast. What will he do now? Guildarts is one of the strongest characters in the anime. If he is already so strong at the start, what kind of ******* can still exist in the fight? Anyway the story itself isn't bad. He wasn't too accurate with the character way of acting, but the error margin isn't that large. So this story is a little standard with an OP mc and harem. I don't mind the harem but I don't really like becoming OP too fast since that destroy any form of *******. Still all in all this story isn't bad. I don't like it but I don't hate it either. I could recommend it to some friends who like the OP kind.

4yr

Sussano97Lv13

I love this Fan-Fic 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

4yr

Shallow_vernalLv10

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FAP_Master_Lv6

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4yr

Minachio_KoulenLv2

Its a good book all in all but i hope that the writer can remove his traveling sicknes. next world can be NARUTO, remove the power up mode cliche let him use his base form to fight. power ups usualy remove the intensity of a match. let him create his own divinity. Like how kratos killed ares so you know. Has allot of potential. Dont give up and write I do wish to see him go to The desolate era Do not give him complex magic names such as fire dragon god etc boring. Too cliche I see you doing things that other writers dont do that you actualy focus on your charecter than yr harem and im proud And dont OP him too much He cn atleast learn every element

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