Hi , people author here , I read most of the comments and reviews on this book and I want to give a good news to you people , about ten days later , I and other native editor and a person who has experience in editing the books will going to edit the book from the start.So for now , thank you guys for all kind of comments and reviews , just know that book will not going to stay like this and it will be edited , thank you !
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Can't wait, the grammar was throwing me all the way off
Is it a real evil mc? like fang yuan type not your run of the mill evil mc.
He's definitely not the "run of the mill evil" I'd say. But I'd also say that while he is "evil", in my personal opinion I think that this story is interesting because most characters in storys, "evil" or not, have a form of "humanity" left in them. Even in cases they're not human. "Humanity" referring to not moral principles but the basic things that make one "human". It varys from person to person what that means... But from what I know, in most cases, the mc can be considered as a "killing machine" in the start, a person with so few desires and so few varieties of emotion, he could barely be considered a "person". He also recognizes this from the start and doesn't really care about it all too much. But the thing I like most about the novel is that the mc gains the potential to "alter his personality" over time... As for how I will only say they don't mention it til more then 20 chapters after it truly started because 20 chapters or so later is when he realized it. Strangely the story, despite the level of brutality, is very interesting to read. I like the story for a lot of reasons, but mainly because I like watching how the mc slowly becomes more "human" over time. Lastly, @Krizantem , if ur reading this then congratulations on getting some help with the editing! I think I might re-read it from beginning after editing is done maybe. Thanks for telling us :)
SanTS:Is it a real evil mc? like fang yuan type not your run of the mill evil mc.
Well I read to chapter 55 I like mcs character how he doesn't hesitate to kill if need be. Mc Acceps his ownself but doesn't indulge and lose himself. But he is kind of idiotic if I have to say for a powerful serial killer. And grammar is only passable I didn't even understand whole wolf city war arc.
Kanata_Tomokui:He's definitely not the "run of the mill evil" I'd say. But I'd also say that while he is "evil", in my personal opinion I think that this story is interesting because most characters in storys, "evil" or not, have a form of "humanity" left in them. Even in cases they're not human. "Humanity" referring to not moral principles but the basic things that make one "human". It varys from person to person what that means... But from what I know, in most cases, the mc can be considered as a "killing machine" in the start, a person with so few desires and so few varieties of emotion, he could barely be considered a "person". He also recognizes this from the start and doesn't really care about it all too much. But the thing I like most about the novel is that the mc gains the potential to "alter his personality" over time... As for how I will only say they don't mention it til more then 20 chapters after it truly started because 20 chapters or so later is when he realized it. Strangely the story, despite the level of brutality, is very interesting to read. I like the story for a lot of reasons, but mainly because I like watching how the mc slowly becomes more "human" over time. Lastly, @Krizantem , if ur reading this then congratulations on getting some help with the editing! I think I might re-read it from beginning after editing is done maybe. Thanks for telling us :)
Wondering when the editing will start. So I can know when to start reading
Glad to hear it!
Does this story have romance in it? I see the tag but I want to make sure that it is an actual part of the story such as him falling in love and having a relationship. I’m not really a fan of action and romance mixed together and I really want to know before I even start reading it.
Your story is amazing thank you for writing such an awesome story do you have any other works done or in the works?
AUTHOR If you need a Free editor I can help if you want the plot is good the concept is not bad but the grammar is tbh Shi...t
I do have one book in english here it is called Artic Law God , but the grammar itself is that bad that it is no different than machine translations , so I suppose you could still read this and look for the "The Mind God" too ?
Michael_Fox_8385:Your story is amazing thank you for writing such an awesome story do you have any other works done or in the works?
Hmm right now we are at the chapter 234 to 235 and there is still no romance on it.I mean it will take time anyway. :)=
FuzzyBearOwO:Does this story have romance in it? I see the tag but I want to make sure that it is an actual part of the story such as him falling in love and having a relationship. I’m not really a fan of action and romance mixed together and I really want to know before I even start reading it.
In the end I am just a normal human , not an serial killer , It is good thing that you know the mc is little bit idiotic for a serial killer because it is written by a regular guy ::= , (I will try to build his character more) , thank you !
SanTS:Well I read to chapter 55 I like mcs character how he doesn't hesitate to kill if need be. Mc Acceps his ownself but doesn't indulge and lose himself. But he is kind of idiotic if I have to say for a powerful serial killer. And grammar is only passable I didn't even understand whole wolf city war arc.
Chaotic Evil at the start as the story goes on it evolves into the Neutral Evil , more like a type that wants to kill if it has reason for it not for the just thrill of it.
SanTS:Is it a real evil mc? like fang yuan type not your run of the mill evil mc.
I hope you don't drop this novel in the middle or your other works. Please fix the grammar it would be great.👍👍👍
Krizantem:I do have one book in english here it is called Artic Law God , but the grammar itself is that bad that it is no different than machine translations , so I suppose you could still read this and look for the "The Mind God" too ?
I don't understand why after more than a month from when I made it you would delete my review when you were the first one to like it?
how many chapters have been edited now because i'm intrested in the story but i can't force myself to read due to this grammar?
Is this novel harem or OTP because I don't read harems.
Its been two months and it still hasnt been edited. I have to restructure everything I read as i go. Its really bad and ruins the flow of the story.
I also wanna know i dont like romance with action espacially when the mc is ruthless if there aint romance i will read it but i am keeping it on hold for now Call my taste sh*t but i would read 2000 chapters of nothing but brutal killing and schemes but i cant read 10 chapters of romance
FuzzyBearOwO:Does this story have romance in it? I see the tag but I want to make sure that it is an actual part of the story such as him falling in love and having a relationship. I’m not really a fan of action and romance mixed together and I really want to know before I even start reading it.
I also wanna know i dont like romance with action espacially when the mc is ruthless if there aint romance i will read it but i am keeping it on hold for now Call my taste sh*t but i would read 2000 chapters of nothing but brutal killing and schemes but i cant read 10 chapters of romance
FuzzyBearOwO:Does this story have romance in it? I see the tag but I want to make sure that it is an actual part of the story such as him falling in love and having a relationship. I’m not really a fan of action and romance mixed together and I really want to know before I even start reading it.
