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Katatafish
KatatafishLv154yr
2020-04-23 11:47

I really enjoy the idea of this book but I just couldn’t get over the grammar of it all. If that was fixed it’d be devouring this book. Top rating if fixed

Supreme Lord Shapeshifter

Krizantem
4.2
349 Chs

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Krizantem
KrizantemTác giả

It will be edited by an native person in time.Thank you.

4yr
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Daoist513202
Daoist513202Lv15

👍👍

4yr
Other Reviews
Krizantem
KrizantemTác giả

Hi , people author here , I read most of the comments and reviews on this book and I want to give a good news to you people , about ten days later , I and other native editor and a person who has experience in editing the books will going to edit the book from the start.So for now , thank you guys for all kind of comments and reviews , just know that book will not going to stay like this and it will be edited , thank you !

4yr

Mikata
MikataLv11

I like merciless mc 😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👹

4yr
XystOblivion
XystOblivionLv12

Writing quality is pretty disappointing. The premise is interesting and I believe that this novel certainly could be good. It’s just I can’t deal with the amount of mistakes and choppy sentence structure. I understand that your first language probably isn’t English and as such I’m still giving you a decent review. People obviously like your work so keep at it. :)

4yr
Noxen
NoxenLv4

Love the book! Love the book! Love the book! Love the book! Love the book! Love the book! Love the book! Love the book! Love the book! Love the book!

4yr
IOnlyEatDinner
IOnlyEatDinnerLv5

It would have been one of the good ones out there, but the writing quality is pretty much on a machine-translation level or even worse. You'd really have to keep your brain running in full capacity in order to make sense of some paragraphs, which makes this book headache-inducing.

4yr
SuperNova365
SuperNova365Lv2

Interesting concept, but poorly executed. The entire novel itself isn't all that bad, it is just the grammar and spelling that gets me. Overlooking that, the novel isn't too bad at all.

4yr
Tibbles
TibblesLv15

I want to start by saying that this is purely criticism from a objective perspective and in no way should be taken personally by the author. With that said the grammar and writing quality is abysmal and needs more work than I could believe possible for a novel with so many chapters and power stones. While the story and world are fine the grammar and English level I think are beyond savaging but I hope that I am proven wrong in the future by a whole team of editors.

4yr
Daoist573024
Daoist573024Lv1

Tiết lộ người tiết lộ thông tin

5yr
RahulThomas
RahulThomasLv13

The novel was very good and i was hooked on it but i am disappointed in mc character transformation. He is a serial killer with no emotion towards anyone and now he has a bottom line. In the initial chapters he was cold blooded, calculative and will do anything as long as it benefits him and later his character is being changed into a typical beta mc. i was really happy to find this book initially but now it's just another disappointing webnovel.

2yr
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