I love this starting and I'm already hooked [img=update]

Thanks fella! your review means a lot to this humble author [img=recommend]

Nice piece! I'll definitely stick around to see how the story unfolds

[img=recommend] don't worry tiger, there's a lot more coming hehe

Thanks for your honesty and maturity . I like reviews like yours helps remind me I'm not perfect and still have stuff to work on . I'll try to make the story more compelling, thanks for reading my work

ok, that's pretty solid. I admit it but I thought starting the story that way would give it a more realistic feel. anyway what's done is done. I see where you're coming from, but I promise you the story gets spicier the more chapters you swallow. thanks ...

This! Now this is very juicy... thanks buddy more chapters are coming so stay hooked!

glad you like it

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