Damaker
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Although the plot is well written, I suggest you use something like italics or a short vertical line to differentiate a thought from a conversation. Moreover, each paragraph is too lengthy which makes those with bad eyesight feel dizzy when reading. Overall, it's an excellent work. Keep up the good work!!