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okay! thanks, if you can give me some advice, don't hesitate. thank you that's a great help.
Ah...E... it's my fault for not explaining the whole rules of this book, so. -master... Mr 'P_Young_4470' is mad at you..- -I know Dara, just explain to him....- -hai!- someone grabbed at my back while sitting and reading the reviews. Oh, my three princesses, Yuna, and Yana san. they all bent slightly to look at what I had read. "blablabla... ahaha, junj, something wrong with this review, ahahaha" Sasi laughed while holding her belly... Sana stared at the review... "I don't know who is this, and my instinct said, he doesn't care what is a man, junj, tell me where his location so I can stab him" "hey Sana, I know you are a hardcore girl, he just telling the truth, leave him alone" "hm.. oh, I think he misunderstand you junj, did you explain to him what is our world?" Sasi stared into my eyes, her breast is hitting my back, did she... "ah...okay.. darling, how can I go to your world, so I can hug him" Yuna san, looked around. "'me too, or I give him a kiss" I stand up and hold Yana's san cheeks once kiss, her soft lip is mine only I will not give her to anyone. "Yana-san, you belong to me, mine only okay" she nodded, her face blushing, my three elf, looking at each other, while Saya, remember what happened at the front of Yasuno forest, also Sana and Sasi, their face is blushing.. I sat in front of my laptop again. -Dara, did you explain to him- -not yet master, then explain to him now- -hai... Mr. P_Young_4470, yes you are right that sypnosis is important..ehem! if you have a lot of pollen, means you are strong, so basically, your pollen, you use it to summon water, so, your group, will not, thirsty, in the middle, of, somewhere. Master should explain in chapter 30 what is group or clan is, but he post this to another platform so I will explain, that a group who have a leader enough to make a living in the desert or forest, he/she can summon the water, enough for her/him people, that's why water is not hard to get, yes, every group has a leader, they struggle for their life, master, is really an idiot like Sasi said, and he lazy when it comes on sypnosis. Okay why did you read this?... ask yourself, you are the only one who can give you an answer.- -ec Dara, I would explain this but I post to another platform.., yes the sypnosis lile nothing, no, there is, but not clear...- like my character said and Dara. if a monster or human has strong pollen, the water is easy, but the land is more vast than water, what I mean is, water is not hard to get for man has strong pollen, etc. .
Amateur review. Ehem!, chapter 12 and so on, my first writing without depending on google translation. HU!, but I know I have a room of improvement, just a little practice. When it comes in my imagination I got a goosebumps but If I wrote the story I can't properly wrote the exact actions. Wait more than months, I can properly tells my action. O!, wait!, I'm having a hard time if I should wrote when my mc sex to my female lead. Like junj, do something when Yana and Yuna sleeping, if you remember that Junj tell something but he can't. Yes!, something far than.., so I don't know if I should.
My load will expired with in 1hour. I won't be upload my next chapter but don't worry the day I miss, I will work my chapter. when my load come, I upload everything. I just using my old phone and data. I will wait the offer of smart. 1 month unli data. every week it shows to their app so I will wait to show. it takes, 2 to 3 days. thank you
this is my first time ever write a novel, well I could not called this a novel. A story of a boy died then reincarnate to another world called Meto. in this world magic is possible and monster exist here, there are more mythical ang legendary monster live in Meto. our mc is a pervert but strong. he will fight strong monster and people. it will go to shool story. or maybe it will change, but my plan this will go to school story. even a work of a child please, stay until I end.
Thank you very much for your advice sir. this is my original isekai world, our MC character is also new. I will try to post here in the paraggraph the look and face of them. expect them to be naked because I'm not very good at drawing. but it may take a long time. I'm just using my old cp and I'm using another language. I just translate to google, then edit. sir thank you for your opinion, I'll do that