you are fighting here? what a coincedence dumb ass of author. Remember me? i Put tons of comments in your book cuz your MC just gave away his talent to his enemy. what a BS plot hanger.

I bet the author is Gay who thinks being straight is too cliche. And Do you think you are George rr Martin or something? Do you believe that a newbie writer would have such trust from the reader that they would read every single chapter to look for the reason instead of dropping it right away? The first chapters are very crucial for world-building and character-building. cuz first chapters are read without skipping a single word. You can't just keep such infromation hidden as plot hanger? if you dont know what plot hanger is its hiding something that would keep the readers hanging throughout the book. plot hanger isn't something that you can easily pick. and depriving readers of such a useful info like the reason of the mc transfering his talents is just the worst type of plot hanger you can find

I bet the author is Gay who thinks being straight is too cliche. And Do you think you are George rr Martin or something? Do you believe that a newbie writer would have such trust from the reader that they would read every single chapter to look for the reason instead of dropping it right away? The first chapters are very crucial for world-building and character-building. cuz first chapters are read without skipping a single word. You can't just keep such infromation hidden as plot hanger? if you dont know what plot hanger is its hiding something that would keep the readers hanging throughout the book. plot hanger isn't something that you can easily pick. and depriving readers of such a useful info like the reason of the mc transfering his talents is just the worst type of plot hanger you can find

I bet the author is Gay who thinks being straight is too cliche. And Do you think you are George rr Martin or something? Do you believe that a newbie writer would have such trust from the reader that they would read every single chapter to look for the reason instead of dropping it right away? The first chapters are very crucial for world-building and character-building. cuz first chapters are read without skipping a single word. You can't just keep such infromation hidden as plot hanger? if you dont know what plot hanger is its hiding something that would keep the readers hanging throughout the book. plot hanger isn't something that you can easily pick. and depriving readers of such a useful info like the reason of the mc transfering his talents is just the worst type of plot hanger you can find

I bet the author is Gay who thinks being straight is too cliche. And Do you think you are George rr Martin or something? Do you believe that a newbie writer would have such trust from the reader that they would read every single chapter to look for the reason instead of dropping it right away? The first chapters are very crucial for world-building and character-building. cuz first chapters are read without skipping a single word. You can't just keep such infromation hidden as plot hanger? if you dont know what plot hanger is its hiding something that would keep the readers hanging throughout the book. plot hanger isn't something that you can easily pick. and depriving readers of such a useful info like the reason of the mc transfering his talents is just the worst type of plot hanger you can find

You transfer your talent to your brother who plans to kill you ? how is he sure that his brother wouldn't kill him afterwards? Author wanted to get out of cliche plots, but he did something that is way way worse than cliche. moronic author with twisted thinking. I bet the author is Gay who thinks being straight is too cliche why not just be gay

You transfer your talent to your brother who plans to kill you ? how is he sure that his brother wouldn't kill him afterwards? Author wanted to get out of cliche plots, but he did something that is way way worse than cliche. moronic author with twisted thinking. I bet the author is Gay who thinks being straight is too cliche why not just be gay

You transfer your talent to your brother who plans to kill you ? how is he sure that his brother wouldn't kill him afterwards? Author wanted to get out of cliche plots, but he did something that is way way worse than cliche. moronic author with twisted thinking. I bet the author is Gay who thinks being straight is too cliche why not just be gay

You transfer your talent to your brother who plans to kill you ? how is he sure that his brother wouldn't kill him afterwards? Author wanted to get out of cliche plots, but he did something that is way way worse than cliche. moronic author with twisted thinking. I bet the author is Gay who thinks being straight is too cliche why not just be gay

You transfer your talent to your brother who plans to kill you ? how is he sure that his brother wouldn't kill him afterwards? Author wanted to get out of cliche plots, but he did something that is way way worse than cliche. moronic author with twisted thinking. I bet the author is Gay who thinks being straight is too cliche why not just be gay

You transfer your talent to your brother who plans to kill you ? how is he sure that his brother wouldn't kill him afterwards? Author wanted to get out of cliche plots, but he did something that is way way worse than cliche. moronic author with twisted thinking. I bet the author is Gay who thinks being straight is too cliche why not just be gay

You transfer your talent to your brother who plans to kill you ? how is he sure that his brother wouldn't kill him afterwards? Author wanted to get out of cliche plots, but he did something that is way way worse than cliche. moronic author with twisted thinking. I bet the author is Gay who thinks being straight is too cliche why not just be gay

You transfer your talent to your brother who plans to kill you ? how is he sure that his brother wouldn't kill him afterwards? Author wanted to get out of cliche plots, but he did something that is way way worse than cliche. moronic author with twisted thinking. I bet the author is Gay who thinks being straight is too cliche why not just be gay

You transfer your talent to your brother who plans to kill you ? how is he sure that his brother wouldn't kill him afterwards? Author wanted to get out of cliche plots, but he did something that is way way worse than cliche. moronic author with twisted thinking. I bet the author is Gay who thinks being straight is too cliche why not just be gay

grammar has left the chat

many spelling errors waste of money

bate

For once let the MC have high grade talent

I feel like you didnt even read your own story once before posting

IMC = Idiot Main character