Thank you for your suggestion and support, I'll try and write much better in the coming weeks. Happy reading!

The story is really good. I liked how you used the words like BHAVA, YOGIN, and I think there are more in the coming parts. I'm looking forward to such words and keep up your words like this it's interesting to hear such unique words. [img=recommend]

Really thoughtful! It was new info, appreciate it.[img=recommend]