ASKeeling
I am an aspiring author and a father. I write to share my passion with as many people as I can. Discord: https://discord.com/invite/ek4fkRw9eS
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ASKeeling1dtrả lời SSJREDtarget at this time was Albert
They couldn't be sure, but they swore the girl shuddered at their touch. They had to be imagining that. She was so doped up that a nuclear bomb could go off next to her and she wouldn't react. They walked over to a metal table and opened a small container that resembled a toolbox. It was full of orange pill bottles with white caps. Each bottle contained exactly 7 pills. They picked up one that was full of blue, ovular pills with the bear paw emblem next to the hurricane emblem on them, the same symbol they wore on their pendant.- ASKeeling1dtrả lời SSJRED
i like how close you got to the correct answer
Albert took her hand and looked into her gray eyes. He wasn't sure why, but an extreme dislike for her rose in him.He had the urge to spit in her face. - ASKeeling7dtrả lời Daniel_Brennan_0577
describing white people by skin color can be challenging. If its necessary to elaborate on which shade of white her skin is, I will, but just to say what she looked like, it wasnt.
Professor Milton was a white woman in her mid thirties. She was the perfect combination of intelligent and cool. She could teach you anything you needed to know in her class, but if you saw her outside of class, she would make you laugh and always knew what was going on with everyone. - ASKeeling21dtrả lời Ares_322
well, that was mean!
Sheree writhed and moaned in ecstasy as Elliot's lips worked their way down her neck. She was lying in his bed pinned beneath him as he punished her with his mouth. He had her arms trapped above her head, held tight in the powerful grip of his left hand. His right hand pinched the stiff nipple of her left breast as his mouth slowly approached. - ASKeeling22dtrả lời ApproachingStorm
I really wish there was some kind of notification when people left comments. I miss so many of these. Sorry for the late reply, that is the reason. Thank you for the well thought out comment as well. I actually do understand your point of view on this matter. I just don't agree with it. Let's view it from the self-insert point of view even. If I envision myself as the ML of a story, why would I want to be shackled to a FL that doesn't want me? If I wrote that version of the story it would bother me, and I'm sure a few others that picked up on it. I could have also simply not made her care if she could get stronger with other people. That too is limiting because it takes away a part of who the FL is. She isn't the type of person to just do something without a reason, even if that reason is one that others won't always like. So, that is the majority of the reasoning behind the choice. What we are left with is a fully informed FL who truly loves the ML. She denied it and ran from it briefly but in the end, she accepted and embraced it. I would much rather be the guy with that girlfriend than the guy whose girlfriend is only with him out of obligation or need.
- ASKeeling29dtrả lời Lewis_Cooper_9575Ch 63 62. The interrogation
- ASKeeling30dtrả lời Lewis_Cooper_9575Ch 63 62. The interrogation
- ASKeeling1mthtrả lời RagingMutant
she also had no interest in dating him. she was purely doing it as a way to test her powers. did I not spell that out?
"I'm free today," she said and shattered Elliot's entire world. " Just give me time to change and shower." - ASKeeling1mthtrả lời Smedzz
That's a good question
Elliot walked into the woods with a newfound sense of urgency. Sheree was close, and she was alone. With every step he took, he scanned the area to his right and his left. He found nothing but undisturbed foliage on either side. He still felt her somewhere nearby, and that was all he needed to keep walking. - ASKeeling1mthtrả lời Lewis_Cooper_9575
lol ok I'll stop mentioning it then
"Stop bringing that up like I knew what the fuck was going on," Rayne said. Her voice was a mixture of defensiveness and irritation. - ASKeeling1mthtrả lời Lewis_Cooper_9575Ch 58 57. Recon
- ASKeeling1mthtrả lời Bk_Vybez
This comment was getting taken seriously until the person leaving it decided to become a sexist. I'm a man though, thanks for reading!
"I desperately need to have an orgasm," Sheree said in his ear. For emphasis she bit his earlobe when she was done speaking. - ASKeeling2mthtrả lời Bob_Saunders
Yeah she was
Sheree writhed and moaned in ecstasy as Elliot's lips worked their way down her neck. She was lying in his bed pinned beneath him as he punished her with his mouth. He had her arms trapped above her head, held tight in the powerful grip of his left hand. His right hand pinched the stiff nipple of her left breast as his mouth slowly approached. - ASKeeling2mthtrả lời James_Bell_6276
lol thanks for catching that!
Đoạn này đã bị xóa - ASKeeling2mthtrả lời manqobadlamini17
He's a pacific islander. so he's a boy from an island lol
As she moved through the room getting ready he wanted to ask her to stay, but he knew she wouldn't. He wasn't the begging type anyway. If she wanted to run off with "Island boy" he wouldn't try to stop her. - ASKeeling2mthtrả lời Mimi729
thanks its nice to see that scene again lol
He looked around and realized they were hovering about 12 feet off the ground. He hugged closer to Sheree. - ASKeeling2mthtrả lời Mimi729
aww i was thinking more the scene from the old Casper movie.
He looked around and realized they were hovering about 12 feet off the ground. He hugged closer to Sheree. - ASKeeling2mthtrả lời Mimi729
lol that's the image i was trying to display with words. images are so cool.
He looked around and realized they were hovering about 12 feet off the ground. He hugged closer to Sheree.