Review Detail of ApproachingStorm in Carnal Cultivation

ApproachingStorm:Author, after reading the comments that have come up while I was gone, I can see that you still don't get what I'm trying to say. It's simple really, the action of the FML kissing a man that isn't the ML isn't bad in itself, instead it's the context and the implications behind that kiss that make it unforgiveable to me. Let me elaborate. The FML being completely willing to kiss a random guy she doesn't know, just to test whether her powers can work with other men is a little annoying, especially since readers love to self insert into these novels. But that isn't the crux of the problem. The real problem is what that kind of action says about the FML, her mindset, and what she might do in the future. It tells us that she is someone who is willing to kiss other men than the boy she has feelings for (whether she realises those feelings or not) just to get back at the ML for making her mad at him. Essentially a cheater's mindset. And you as the author being able to write something like this into a character in a self insert novel only says bad things for the future of their relationship and the novel. Like the FML actually cheating next time cuz my boy doesn't have the relationship plot armour every other self insert protagonist has. And I personally, regardless of the author saying it won't happen again, won't take my chances on the sinking ship that is this novel. Finally, I would like to add that being willing to write a character that can get cheated on (to any extent whether they are in a relationship or not) is a sign of a good author because they can write more complex characters. So I actually commend you for being able to write that. But I was looking for a self insert novel, like most other readers, and this isn't it. Next time you write a novel, rather put it mainstream instead of on webnovel, as I see a lot of potential in your writing, or write one with regards to your audience (self inserts like me). Good luck with your novel, it's a shame that I won't be here to see the promising story progress.