Zyn_Gamemaster
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Zyn_Gamemaster2 months agoCommentedSee this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair
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- Zyn_Gamemaster4 years agoPosted
Ok so this is a decent story with alot of cring and some badass moments. I like the somewhat fast pace power scaling in novels since I myself dont like super long buildups and like seeing OP characters Rule the world and deal with the power. But to me in this novel there is alot that the MC can do but chooses to be a simp instead. I still read this story but the MC is lack luster the world building is nice most of the time. I do like some of the side characters and the out of the box thinking in some of the chapters. I would love to see more ingenuity since the MC still doesnt have a refined base to his power it would be nice to see that neglect bite him in the a$$.But my rating stands its still a decent read and yes I do use coins on this book I still Harbour high hopes for this story. Good work over all author keep refining your craft it will get better.
