Xianxia: Tortoise  Longevity Art

In my new work on the pursuit of immortality by the main character, to the extent of venturing and investing in space exploration, when compared to other humans, what he lacks the most is not time. Please readers bear with any issues that might be related to word quality. Try my best, and please support this novel!

I must say this was a good read so far , looking forward to the new chapters that are to come.  Its good to see a story where the MC isn't some young master who tries to get stronger for any reason like saving a girl or revenge. Also, not like a lot of the newer novels where MC is an evil being that goes around causing chaos.  I believe, so far, this novel is going in the direction of a type of novel I have wanted to read but have yet to find , where MC just lives to improve himself while being able to live longer than others.  I must say it would be good if MC could stay neutral and that we can just experience his life improving as well as his journeys through space and different worlds. Keep up the good work!

Okay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Deserve some praise for this one. It seems you did not sleep while writing like the other one. Big up! Continue working hard and with this one we will be taking all the votes for you.

As of Ch. 225 I’ll be honest I’m a little torn on my thoughts on this novel. I shall explain why. First of all the overall concept of the novel is great, author does well to make sure there are no plot holes in terms of the MC’s decision making or how he advances in strength. The pace of the novel is also good, it’s fast enough that you can enjoy the progress and also understand what’s going on. The word count for every chapter is also really long, and finally the storyline itself is GOOD. I’ll be real though, there’s a massive info dump in this novel. It’s not very noticeable early on but as you hit the later chapters, it goes into extreme depth with the MCs thought process, reasonings behind his actions and then over explains everything that’s happening. I, for one, don’t mind info dumps if they’re done correctly. But that amount I’ve read, and where the story is currently at don’t add up. It becomes a pain to read at some point because you can see the MC being fleshed out and improving with every chapter but in the grand scheme of things the MC is literally going from a power level of 10 to 11 and the people he’s catching up to are sitting on 100. (This is an example, not a spoiler). The crazy part though is that because every chapter is condensed (and long which I like), you can’t help but think that the story is progressing well when in reality there’s not a lot happening (much like DBZ fight). Sigh aside from the insane info dump, the only other thing I can point my finger at is that things that happen in the novel seem erratic and displaced. For instance, the MC will be breaking through a stage, and then the POV will randomly switch to his senior sister going through her own troubles, and then it’ll switch to some random disciple from a different faction talking with his faction friend etc. This just led to me skipping over some sections because I was just more interested in what was happening with the MC and I think that takes away from what the author was trying to do. Ultimately, the problems I’ve mentioned aren’t super big and can be improved upon and I think it’ll make the nocel much easier to read. If you’re considering reading this novel just go ahead and have a read. It does start a little differently that most other novels like this start but the storyline starts to get interesting after the first few chapters (I think 10?). My brain hurts.

Rereview: Story is a complete mess.. writing is so bad that it is hard to understand anything in the novel.. There are too many things that I'm unable to understand that the novel should be rewritten completely.. it is very bad novel

Well the idea is unique and future looks promising but we didn't get to see any of his past experience so he kind of feels withdrawn from the world...Maybe add some potential partner in the later story.. overall great writing