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Soul Land 3: Legend of the Jade Emperor

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A man is transmigrated in Douluo Dalu 3 world with the powers of Okhwang from God of Highschool. First novel, please cut me some slack. Trying to improve.

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Zeno
ZenoLv5

In my opinion, there is not much point in having an "MC" who has not read the two novels / stories, and who has no idea of ​​the power he has or the world he is in, as the "MC" is now It is known how the story will unfold, the actions of the "MC" become a little predictable, which makes him boring. - More interesting, or better, would have been if the "MC" knew the power he had, and the world he was in, because he could take advantage of several opportunities that would benefit him, I think his actions would not be as predictable, since at Having knowledge, he would develop various plans, which would make his career interesting. - Instead of the third eye granting you an overwhelming power so suddenly and using another type of energy, it would have been better if it was your second martial spirit, having two super quality spirits (the eye and the sword), you would have a innate power of 20 !, their third eye and sword if they had the same abilities (the abilities they have would be their basic characteristics) and the two martial spirits can be used at the same time, but the power they can exercise is minimal by the current power of the MC, and the stronger the "MC" becomes, the more power he can use, until he reaches the "god" rank and the MC is if he is super cheated, in addition to his spirit / soul rings, giving additional abilities to his spirits than they originally have. I think this would have been better, in addition to creating a beautiful jade armor, entitled "Jade Emperor". - I don't know what the author thought, but in my opinion it would have been a better integration of the powers of the "Jade Emperor" in the world of Douluo Dalu as I explained,

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3RR0R_404Lv4

Good just good like I'm not a critic or someone that is good a writing sentences so yeahh Writing Quality - well I don't know like I'm not really good at describing things so let's just say its good since ummm I can read it well? Like it has good grammar so it had to be good. Updating Stability - well its 1 chapter/day so its good and ummm don't really know what I should say more to this...... Story Development - well its not rushed so its good right? Yeah its good and ummm the mc does his own thing? Like he's not just some bystander doing nothing and ummm........**** I forgot what im gonna write.........anywayyyy......overall its good but uuuhhh buttt.......****.....yeahhhh just ignore this...... Character Design - well the mc is overpowered so yeahh its good and uhhhh he's mature and calm and mature and.............moving onnn.....uhh the characters are good yeahh good but they hating gu yue soooo its probably not good buttt who cares its not like she's not gonna change right? Yes yep good definitely best yeahhhh annddd uhhhh the other characters umm like they're just side characters and not main characters so no one will probably remember them......anndd I guess this is it? YeH yeah yeah so its done. World Background - well uhh I don't have a single fucking clue and. Uhhh......brain cells. .......its FOOKING GOOD SO ITS FOOJING GRWAT so its should be good and uhhh ****k ummm da **** am I supposed to write here? Like should I just copy paste the sypnosis? Yeahhhh I should...... SYPNOSIS - First novel, please cut me some slack. Trying to improve. So is that good? Its probably is so its good.....and uhh bye I guess? Overall - well its fucking good so u should read it I guess so yeah read it and suck it . .. Wait what? Uhhh. Ignore tthisssss🔜🔜🔜🔜🔝🔝 so yeah I think I did a good review I think? Yeahh......

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