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2020-07-09 01:40

Good just good like I'm not a critic or someone that is good a writing sentences so yeahh Writing Quality - well I don't know like I'm not really good at describing things so let's just say its good since ummm I can read it well? Like it has good grammar so it had to be good. Updating Stability - well its 1 chapter/day so its good and ummm don't really know what I should say more to this...... Story Development - well its not rushed so its good right? Yeah its good and ummm the mc does his own thing? Like he's not just some bystander doing nothing and ummm........**** I forgot what im gonna write.........anywayyyy......overall its good but uuuhhh buttt.......****.....yeahhhh just ignore this...... Character Design - well the mc is overpowered so yeahh its good and uhhhh he's mature and calm and mature and.............moving onnn.....uhh the characters are good yeahh good but they hating gu yue soooo its probably not good buttt who cares its not like she's not gonna change right? Yes yep good definitely best yeahhhh annddd uhhhh the other characters umm like they're just side characters and not main characters so no one will probably remember them......anndd I guess this is it? YeH yeah yeah so its done. World Background - well uhh I don't have a single fucking clue and. Uhhh......brain cells. .......its FOOKING GOOD SO ITS FOOJING GRWAT so its should be good and uhhh ****k ummm da **** am I supposed to write here? Like should I just copy paste the sypnosis? Yeahhhh I should...... SYPNOSIS - First novel, please cut me some slack. Trying to improve. So is that good? Its probably is so its good.....and uhh bye I guess? Overall - well its fucking good so u should read it I guess so yeah read it and suck it . .. Wait what? Uhhh. Ignore tthisssss🔜🔜🔜🔜🔝🔝 so yeah I think I did a good review I think? Yeahh......

Soul Land 3: Legend of the Jade Emperor

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