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PEARLS

Author: F_R_A
Fantasy Romance
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have you ever like someone so much to the point of doing almost every thing for that person? i always believe that you can't give someone everything, cause you yourself don't know everything you are capable of doing. it's like an unending pile of new things to know about yourself but though I can't do everything i still did my best. I would always do my best, for the person who owns a big part of my heart... funny how this little puppy love made me happy and sad at the same time... how it made me live and die because of simple words... how it made me cry and smile for the same reason... and how it made me love and be afraid of the same person at the same time how this little puppy love changed me people would often ask " If given a chance to go back in time when you first meet him would you go towards him and not change a thing or walk away and not feel this pain you're feeling right now?" and my answer would always be the same and I know this answer would never change " I would still walk towards him and not change a bit of it because this pain I'm feeling right now would always remind me how happy I am when I was with him and how those changes I made for him before made a amazingly wonderful person today" My life is always an unending adventure i meet different people said no to lots of love who tries to enter my life giving a piece of my heart to someone who rejected it over and over again and not to forget the unending list of guys who is now a very big part of my life and the unfortunate events that happened because of a little walking disaster like me I always believed that if you love someone you can never unlove that someone but you will just find someone who you would love more than you use to love that person this is how my delectable life became delectable this story did happened but the names and places would be changed for privacy of the people who are part of the story P.S if ever he can read this (i know he won't be able to because his too busy) i just want him to know he would forever have this special part of my heart . . . but i would find someone who would hold a bigger part of my heart even bigger than what he used to own

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FayZan
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Heyoo! Nice to see a fellow Pakistani Webnovel Enthusiast! Although I see you're new to this side of literature, new authors who wanna try out web novels are always welcome in the community as they can bring in something new and unique to the table, rather than rehashing the same old tropes in a new context. I've gone through the Novel (currently 9 chapters as of writing this) and will be giving you some feedbacks and criticisms from the point of view of someone who's been in the web novel sphere for a quite a while now and is well versed in English as a first language as well as classic literature, if that's alright with you. If that isn't and if any of my feedback feels insulting to you, you can tell me quietly and I'll remove it. I'm not here to offend you or make you feel bad for trying something new and quit.OK, now that we've got that out of the way. I'll tell you what you're doing right. like I mentioned before, since you're new. you're also bringing something new to the table. At least from what I can tell, you're not outright copying a story you read just with a self insert character this time. which is something that alot of beginners end up doing subconsciously. So your plot being unique is your first plus.Secondly, the way you brought in the classic Muqalma/dialogue format that pak schools love to teach, and implemented it into your story ch 2 onwards is something I've yet to see in Webnovel formats tbh. Ofcourse, novelty doesn't automatically make something better, that's something that depends on how the author takes advantage of the new gates this novel method opens for them, and how good the execution of the method itself is. simply being out of the box isn't enough, you need to justify it with competence.In your case, the play dialogue format has some advantages and disadvantages.The advantage is that the conversation is uninterrupted, snappy and quick. Less fluff for the reader to go through.Disadvantages are that it's a little bit less readable without extra formatting. you'll have to BOLD or CAPITALISE your names so that they stand out. Also you can't show emotions in which the dialogue is said, without fully committing to the Scriptwriter/Play Dialogue formatting. for example:Usually what you'll see is:Max replied shakily, "Yeah.. sure". "Nice!" exclaimed Sarah. Happy that she got what she wanted.If you want to convey the same message in your style. you'd probably have to do something like this everytime.MAX: (Voice Shaking) "Yeah.. sure."SARAH: (Excited) "Nice!"Sarah was happy she got what she wanted.-------------Both are abit different and achieve slightly different results in how the emotion is delivered to the reader.On a slightly different but related note, as I've pointed out in one of the paragraphs, your Current usage of brackets seems abit scattered. There are many a times where you'd be better off just replacing those with a comma as it would seem more natural. Especially in the paragraph format parts that occur outside the Dialogue. Going with regular conventions might be key.Other than that you're killing it, I'd recommend getting someone you know who's more experienced in English Literature, to be your proofreader or editor. Simply having another pair of eyes go through it can help you avoid do many silly typos or grammatical errors. Alternatively, if you can't find someone, you could always come back to old chapters preferably once you've written at least 20 chapters and rework them with the new and improved sense you have after writing so many chapters.That's another thing you'll grow to love about writing web novels. You'll feel yourself improve overtime. Especially when you come back to one you wrote a couple years ago.So Keep Going on this journey. I wish you the best of luck! Happy Writing!

LeonardD
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Really good your style is really unique and I like it keep going

Cosmic_nerd
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Girl you really overdid yourself. This is absolutely beautiful. You're such a precious addition to the writing community <3

Rahat_Nadeem
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I like your storyIt's quite nice and I love the characters

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