One Piece: Dream of Immortality

Starts out very interesting but then it is just the normal main story just less cool and with less struggles as the MC is "helping" everything go along "smoothly" overall the MC is not only the 3rd wheel of this story, she is also actively making everything boring.

In my opinion this started off good but then the mc got forced to join the straw hats by ‘fate’ then it became like every other one piece ff in existence.

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Trash. Another yuri trash. Full of cringe lines. MC is pathetic, reborn cultivator? nah, just pathetic. Also mc is not the only reincarnated person, so feel free not to even bother with this trash. You're welcome.

mc has no brain. He has lived so many years, he has become stronger, but he does not have a brain. Mc has the brain of the characters in mtl novels. as someone who has never fought, as someone who has practiced xulian in his previous life and gained superior powers. mc does not have a brain, it can be called no brain. There is no logic in the novel. The novel is garbage The author tried to make his novel look like Naruto Dream to Immortaly.

was pretty fun until she was forced to join luffy's crew due to some fate bs, got relatively boring from there on.

Start was very good, it felt unique too, but now matter what mc does and how much ever changes she makes, events are happening almost the exact same way. It feels like there is no consequence of mc's actions.

Nice story, but I don't appreciate the fact that every single one piece arc has a twist with a made up characters where everything becomes harder just for the mc to have something to do in the story. Why I don't like it? Because it's whimsical and your decisions just happen for no good reason.

Great story until she joined the straw hats then it went downhill

It's a straw hat fic! if you like fanfiction that starts well with a character who has his own adventures. the beginning is good but after she joins luffy I would have liked to know it before not to read it so I put it here for those like me who do not like this type of story

It's a very good fanfic, still too early for any in-depth analysis, but in general I can say that the quality of the writing is good, I didn't see any problems with the story or even the details and so far it seems to have a lot of potential. I'm looking forward to seeing how the story develops in the future. I would like to say to the author that if the fanfic remains this good, I would be willing to subscribe to patreon in the future if the price is good like about 3$ for 10 chapters. Being a fanfic I don't really subscribe to patreon if they charge above that because I just don't think it's worth it since the dollar is expensive in my country.

Unorginaality at its finest. Brain dead MC that has the appearance of a 12 year old boy with a 🐱. Furthermore it’s a Strawhat tag along done in the worse way possible. Follows Luffy around making next to no changes & supposed 617 year old sword smith that WONT KILL ANYONE because Luffy said no. Even when she breaks apart from Luffy and is on her on she refuses to kill EVIL people even after telling Robin that evil cultivators need to be killed… All in all I true waste of time and one of the most unoriginal fanfics I’ve ever had the misfortune of reading.

i read up to the part that says cultivator then i dropped it...........................................................................................

Typical Chinese tale. These work when the world is original since the norm is to be strong since someone will want to humiliate you but when it is a predetermined world they must adapt to the new world and not follow the Chinese standard

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Es como leer el manga de one piece con 1 personaje de fondo más el cual no hace mucho o lo hace cuando todo está resuelto y no tiene ningún peso en la historia.

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the only bad thing about this novel is Yuri but I'm glad she is collecting harem members and acting cringe with cringe women from harem. All harem novels are cringe with those arrogant woman and obviously the cringe screw head mc who acts like a 14 y/o kid. maybe most authors in Webnovel are 14 y/o because it's full of third rate villains, harem and Yuri who can't accept normal relationship between man and woman. Most of this content isn't directed to author of this novel or his work because it's good except Yuri.

very fun read i laughed and got hooked with this i recommend this fanfic my only problem with it was the yuri tag however it is not the focus in this novel.

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