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Lawson26
Lawson26Lv45mth
2024-06-10 18:54

Unorginaality at its finest. Brain dead MC that has the appearance of a 12 year old boy with a 🐱. Furthermore it’s a Strawhat tag along done in the worse way possible. Follows Luffy around making next to no changes & supposed 617 year old sword smith that WONT KILL ANYONE because Luffy said no. Even when she breaks apart from Luffy and is on her on she refuses to kill EVIL people even after telling Robin that evil cultivators need to be killed… All in all I true waste of time and one of the most unoriginal fanfics I’ve ever had the misfortune of reading.

One Piece: Dream of Immortality

ScarletArboretum
4.3
470 Chs

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InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1

Starts out very interesting but then it is just the normal main story just less cool and with less struggles as the MC is "helping" everything go along "smoothly" overall the MC is not only the 3rd wheel of this story, she is also actively making everything boring.

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DaddyDavo
DaddyDavoLv14

In my opinion this started off good but then the mc got forced to join the straw hats by ‘fate’ then it became like every other one piece ff in existence.

1yr
ZoneTail
ZoneTailLv5

Writing Quality ---------- ✪✪✪✪✪ Stability of Updates ----- ✪✪✪✪✪ Story Development ----- ✪✪✪✪✪ Character Design ------- ✪✪✪✪✪ World Background ----- ✪✪✪✪✪

2yr
BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv5

Trash. Another yuri trash. Full of cringe lines. MC is pathetic, reborn cultivator? nah, just pathetic. Also mc is not the only reincarnated person, so feel free not to even bother with this trash. You're welcome.

1yr
timeawayfromstress
timeawayfromstressLv1

mc has no brain. He has lived so many years, he has become stronger, but he does not have a brain. Mc has the brain of the characters in mtl novels. as someone who has never fought, as someone who has practiced xulian in his previous life and gained superior powers. mc does not have a brain, it can be called no brain. There is no logic in the novel. The novel is garbage The author tried to make his novel look like Naruto Dream to Immortaly.

1yr
Lorenzo
LorenzoLv14

was pretty fun until she was forced to join luffy's crew due to some fate bs, got relatively boring from there on.

1yr
LittleDemon47
LittleDemon47Lv4

Start was very good, it felt unique too, but now matter what mc does and how much ever changes she makes, events are happening almost the exact same way. It feels like there is no consequence of mc's actions.

1yr
R0B
R0BLv2

Nice story, but I don't appreciate the fact that every single one piece arc has a twist with a made up characters where everything becomes harder just for the mc to have something to do in the story. Why I don't like it? Because it's whimsical and your decisions just happen for no good reason.

2yr
Reiya9
Reiya9Lv4

Great story until she joined the straw hats then it went downhill

1yr
faucheusestar
faucheusestarLv4

It's a straw hat fic! if you like fanfiction that starts well with a character who has his own adventures. the beginning is good but after she joins luffy I would have liked to know it before not to read it so I put it here for those like me who do not like this type of story

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