New God in marvel

While the story and idea is good the way it is delivered is below average, not enjoyable and bland. I suggest the author to read other well written novels ( not the transalates ones) and compare it with his for self reflection. It's a good try though, maybe he's not a native speaker.

The story is super bland. Multiple gacha system cliche and whatnot. No actual interaction bw characters. Mc is designed horribly. And that's 140 words... Phew

This is annoying. The harem members are cardboards, most of them wouldn’t even be born till Odin is king or in 21th century. The other half are people who are higher beings with their own pride, they can’t just Willy-nilly become culs lovers just bc mf degenerates wanted too. This ff is soooo doodoo, does the author expect that having a harem-no harem poll help make this ff better? I just can’t believe that the author thinks he can write something with that bad grammar and execution, I’m not sure if he’s even using a grammar app/extension, but if he is then all I know is that his English might have broken it😂. Just reading a few sentences made me lose 2 brain cells.

5 star because some weird guy deside to give 2 star even before 4 chapters.. i like tge story and how he is born at the era of Odin.. Please do not make his gacha system OP like powers from other Anime too much(some is fine)..let gacha be like small strengthning pill, sword mastery basic.. GOOD LUCK..

Honestly, this is one of the worst stories I've read. The overall premise could've set this up to be amazing, but it was wasted by an author that doesn't seem to want to improve. The story might as well be a wall of text, as there is no way to read the story smoothly, because you have to add punctuation every second. The characters don't have a personality, and the MC is awful.

All in all not really a mature idea of ​​how the MC behaves and everything around it. It appears as if the author has little knowledge of Marvel (comics, cartoons and movies) as well as how thinking, feeling and living people/beings behave. The story could have real potential if the author tries to make his characters seem more alive. It would also help if the MC doesn't think like every other MC of a fanfic that he is above everything and everyone with his opinion and belief and so on.

Don't read this. The grammar here is very bad. The author sometimes confuses their and there, uses u instead of you, doesn't capitalize proper nouns, and many more. Not only that, but the personality of the MC is one-dimensional. He is just a cold person whose goal is still not shown which makes me think of a fourteen-year-old edge lord. The MC wants to create another realm besides Asgard but there is no real reason. Beating Odin in the fight for the throne is easier. Now let me talk about the harem. In the poll of the Author, the MC's harem will consist of Wanda, Death, Hela, Gaea, and black widow. That's so messed up and illogical. Three of the people I mentioned don't even exist yet and the MC is thousands of years older than them. Not to mention, Hela is the daughter of his younger brother so that is messed up. And the idea that prideful beings such as Hela, Death, and Gaea will accept black widow in the harem and being in a harem, in general, is illogical. They won't accept being in a harem with a mortal woman whose only strong point is spying. I was originally going to give it two stars but decided to give it one to balance the people who gave five stars for a trash novel like this.

The story itself is great, but the update frequency is very slow, but otherwise the story is good. NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE

I have read this story before and just resumed to read it again. I think Cur's character does not progress very well, he is too much a predictable character knowing everything and seems to achieve almost everything that he works for,which makes the character the illusion of perfection.I wish there is another Isekai reader or character of equal potential that comes to avenge something/someone since he have made a lot of enemies .

Ошибки и скудное построение предложений. Сухой текст. Неполноценный сюжет. Картонные персонажи. Раздражающие диалоги. Гарем. Неопытный автор. Минусов много, а из плюсов лишь хорошая задумка, но её слили в унитаз.

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I love this story but currently it is on a break I think. Based on the lack of chapters. When it does get updated it’s usually the one I save for last to really enjoy it.

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Сначала было хорошо, но потом автор поддался влиянию большинства.. Настоящий позор... . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . . .

meh..... no harem, that was a bait....bruh

well ...................................................................................................................................................................................................its honestly too bland

I honestly love the fan-fic the start was kinda rocky but in the current chapters it’s great.

I am just writing this to earn points!I am just writing this to earn points!I am just writing this to earn points!I am just writing this to earn points!I am just writing this to earn points!

man no matter how many Times i come back to read this I can barely make it baste 4 chapters before dropping it...such a garbage novel just can't be enjoyed...

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