Naruto System in One Piece

The timeline of this novel is all messed up, there is also the Chinese cliche in later chapters (when he becomes a marine - he becomes a young master and all the girls fall for him for no reason). Last thing is that the names of techniques is all machine translated so it is quite weird to read... Ignore this and it's not a bad fangic.

It was good at the start but he became a marine which while okay was annoying because he got really low ranks for no reason other than he’s young and the translation dies part way through

Im asian and im fine with cliches but my man really had too add ching chong bing bong bing chilling wuxia so i had too drop it since its not one piece anymore its wuxia

I enjoyed this a lot the the first 50 chapters, but then Chinese Wuxia cliches came along and… I just had to drop it. Hina and Verdan are really annoying, and MC himself not being ranked highly even when he can contend with Kaido even for a while. Better yet, he fought and killed Sleeping King Kong even when Admirals supposedly couldn’t. And he was given a rank below X Drake?

It is the typical Chinese story. At first it seems good but then all that Chinese nonsense appears that they put into the fic It is the typical Chinese story. At first it seems good but then all that Chinese nonsense appears that they put into the fic

author got most of the facts about one piece and Naruto wrong, and to be honest I did not feel like getting attached to this novel. it was boring and if are thinking about reading this, i would say don't (well if you are in mood to read senseless fanfiction then go ahead)

Useless wuxia nonsense. They ruined a beautiful and potentially potent subject. Not worth reading......................................................................................................................

a stupid mc and without charisma the story has no romance the mc is stupid with women despite having very powerful abilities he is defeated like an idiot the control with the canon is horrible nothing is understood and the worst joins the sailors

Bad, very bad...I know this stories is not about romance but this is just leaving a bad taste on my mouth...he's cold and doesn't give a fvk to woman, and when finally he choose a woman he jusy leave her in small island almost got raped by so thugs...it's really bad,

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if I had to summarize this story in one word it would be 'forced'.... but oh well what's done is done. pretty good translation. if you don't want a system with intelligence then this is not for you. the only good thing about this book is the translation, everything else just feels wrong in one way or another.

Totally sucks. How did MC learn to fight with swords, throw knives and masterfully use complex ninjutsu!? For a month of training!? Hahaha, the biggest joke! Do not read, otherwise you will definitely waste your time in vain.

I Know it is hard to write a book....as i have to write detail about my experiment to my senior but we read to enjoy your ff but now we get a bossy system you might have read counteless novel and read the comments no people don't like abusive system....

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the beginning was uplifting, a slightly dark story about how the hero gradually became stronger... and this story is not about that. the hero is a whiner and a weakling who wants to commit suicide because he is not given the strength. just train like everyone else slowly, since all this is not for the hero, so he will sit and whine, doing nothing. but having received the system, the hero instantly became an arrogant freak, and yes, Chinese clichés.... conclusion: this story is trash

This belongs in the great taste poor execution reddit. If they gave this isekai or system to a reasonably competent main charachter it would be 10 times better. Just saying if your main charachter can't figure out soru or shigan after having watched the anime it's just hopeless.

story and événement forced. Bad développement of thé mc. action fast, dumb and wooden. mc overpowered but lose because the author need the mc to lose

useless novel... Mc always considers to get powerful jutsu but forgets that there are very useful jutsus among basic jutsus like transformation jutsu,etc..., n gaps personality is portrayed wrong ... beginning concept was interesting... that's it ... what a disappointment 😞 😪

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