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GoldLucIfeR
GoldLucIfeRLv32yr
2021-12-11 22:35

I Know it is hard to write a book....as i have to write detail about my experiment to my senior but we read to enjoy your ff but now we get a bossy system you might have read counteless novel and read the comments no people don't like abusive system....

Naruto System in One Piece

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2.9
532 Chs

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Harris_Kirik
Harris_KirikLv3

The timeline of this novel is all messed up, there is also the Chinese cliche in later chapters (when he becomes a marine - he becomes a young master and all the girls fall for him for no reason). Last thing is that the names of techniques is all machine translated so it is quite weird to read... Ignore this and it's not a bad fangic.

3yr

Gibbbeast
GibbbeastLv3

It was good at the start but he became a marine which while okay was annoying because he got really low ranks for no reason other than he’s young and the translation dies part way through

2yr
TheFanBoy
TheFanBoyLv4

Im asian and im fine with cliches but my man really had too add ching chong bing bong bing chilling wuxia so i had too drop it since its not one piece anymore its wuxia

2yr
thacarter600
thacarter600Lv12

I enjoyed this a lot the the first 50 chapters, but then Chinese Wuxia cliches came along and… I just had to drop it. Hina and Verdan are really annoying, and MC himself not being ranked highly even when he can contend with Kaido even for a while. Better yet, he fought and killed Sleeping King Kong even when Admirals supposedly couldn’t. And he was given a rank below X Drake?

3yr
Drako_0692
Drako_0692Lv1

It is the typical Chinese story. At first it seems good but then all that Chinese nonsense appears that they put into the fic It is the typical Chinese story. At first it seems good but then all that Chinese nonsense appears that they put into the fic

1yr
SSan1212
SSan1212Lv4

author got most of the facts about one piece and Naruto wrong, and to be honest I did not feel like getting attached to this novel. it was boring and if are thinking about reading this, i would say don't (well if you are in mood to read senseless fanfiction then go ahead)

2yr
ReaderCat
ReaderCatLv2

Useless wuxia nonsense. They ruined a beautiful and potentially potent subject. Not worth reading......................................................................................................................

1yr
Alex3DxD
Alex3DxDLv3

a stupid mc and without charisma the story has no romance the mc is stupid with women despite having very powerful abilities he is defeated like an idiot the control with the canon is horrible nothing is understood and the worst joins the sailors

2yr
Arthas_D_Leon
Arthas_D_LeonLv3

Bad, very bad...I know this stories is not about romance but this is just leaving a bad taste on my mouth...he's cold and doesn't give a fvk to woman, and when finally he choose a woman he jusy leave her in small island almost got raped by so thugs...it's really bad,

2yr
Banane64_Yan
Banane64_YanLv4

Reveal spoiler

1yr
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