Naruto: Fusion Center

I like fanfic with the theme of the ninja world (Naruto world), maybe the story will be interesting to read. I hope you as a writer can finish this story because most Naruto fanfics don't finish (drop out).

Interesting premise. Not what I would call well executed. The scenes feel forced and the characters feel like strangers to the reader. Most importantly some of what is going on feel like incomplete thoughts or rushed.

Very promising start so far. A lot of exciting stuff going on. I also really like that this MC is challenging hokage and danzo in the light and in front of the other clan leaders rather than concealing strength for years and years, I find it quite refreshing