Korkyros

Honestly the interactions with the family and Jadelyn is starting to piss me off.

this whole violent women portion has been ill conceived. it doenst make much sense to be included in the story.

So the author is writing originally in spanish?

I am fine with cultivation worlds. Honestly the only critique I have for you is how quickly you pass through worlds or interact with their plots outside of Harry Potter. But You have mentioned returning to previous worlds is a possibility so I just follow your flow and hope you pull something off that makes sense. As for the story for cultivation stories, their just power fantasies primarily and I do not read or watch many of them due to my issue with poor translations.

Usually I don't have an issue with things unless it is a change in something like the system's core like giving it sentience or simply does not fit logically in the lore or the story. You could do something morally irreprehensible and I would be fine since it is a story you are telling and sometimes flawed characters are good. Plus if it is sexual, I am pretty sure 90% of readers on this site are just horny so I don't think most would hate you for that unless its like NTR towards the protagonist or something and even then some people like that. I think the only thing outside of my previous stated points are the summoning of people, just feels like convolution of the story how most people use it. (aka too large of a harem)

Have you considered language translation when expanding abroad?

This whole part of the system is retarded. It offers false/unneeded conflict in the way it has been portrayed. IF it isnt revealed soon I will drop this and note the author's username so I dont read anything else from them.

Not exactly an Idea but curiosity. When in the character's story are the templates drawn? significant moments? before their journeys? their deaths? After their journey but before their deaths?

This is what fandom had to say. It emits a light so bright and powerful that it is capable of burning a large portion of Corruption blocking the Ivory Citadel. It also grants the wielder immense power, as Archon Lucien was able to regrow his wings while fighting Death, then telepathically lift an enormous boulder in an attempt to crush the Horseman, to no avail. The rod is so powerful that the Angels feared that if it fell into the hands of the Destroyer, it would mean certain defeat for the Hellguard.

Is some ROB (Random Omnipotent Being) fucking with me?